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Post by Nickpick on Feb 22, 2010 10:12:50 GMT -6
Thanks! it's not a series, just something to write when i'm bored. Also thanks sports, i use to look like that before i cut my hair. Now i look like Clark Kent if he was in a mental hospital!
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 22, 2010 20:13:28 GMT -6
"Nick got shoot by someone unknown, Juke kicked Zane's ass because he wouldn't go to the prom with him but Zane ended up accepting, Sportsfan and SGK Attack got in a fight and Sportsfan got hurt. There now i don't have to go into detail and now, The Season Finale of Gossip Guy
Gossip Guy
The sirens to the ambulance was a loud, piercing noise. Nick couldn't hear them. He barely could hear the paramedics doing their job
"I need 2 CC's of Polyxege and a clamp, Stat!"
Nick's eyes are closed, The next moment Nick is in the hospital, Doctor's and Nurse's all around him. Their words mean nothing to him. He listens for words like 'death', 'blood lose' and 'goner' but he heard nothing. He's pushed on his strecher into another room while another strecher is pushed down the hall with Sportsfan on it, hooked up to a breathing machine, blood covering his head and body. He hears nothing and feels nothing but pain
-Meanwhile-
"JUST DANCE! IT'LL BE OKAY!..."
The music blasts in the in Juke's room, Juke is dancing around with towel around his waists, He throws his towel, hitting the door, slides his boxers on while still dancing and pulls his white tuxedo pants on.
"JUST DANCE! Spin That Record Babe! Da Da Doo-Do-MMM"
He puts his coat on, buttoning the last button. Juke looks at himself in his mirror that was behind the door. He licks his index fingers and combs them over his eyebrows
"You sexy b*tch"
The song ends when Juke hears the honking of a car horn outside. Juke turns his radio off and looks out the window to see Zane's car. A black 2009 Ford Mustang, Juke rushes outside and Zane is getting out
"You realize how badly i hate you right now?"
"It's good to see you too...WOOT i'm excited"
"Did you just hear me...I hate you"
"Thanks, You look nice too "
"It's like nailing jello to a tree"
Zane walks off, Juke smiles, getting in his car
"Your here early, Prom doesn't start for another 2 hours"
"It was either stay at my house and let me parents complain how they think i'm gay, thanks by the way for telling your parents who told my parents...or pick you up and..i don't know...go eat or something"
-An Hour Later-
Nick opens his eyes, first person he sees is Juke standing at the edge of his bed, Nick close his eyes again then opens them and he's gone
"Juke?"
"Nick!"
Nick looks over at the entrance, the turning of his head causes massive amount of pain to travel from the wound to his whole body. Standing at the doorway was Cradleman, He walks in and walks up to Nick's bed
"C...What...What happened?"
"I found you at the house, someone shot you with an FX Gun. It's a blessing your alive, Doctor's think your some kind of Superman"
"Ridiculous...Superman can dodge bullets but thanks...though"
Cradleman smiles
"So did you see who shot you?"
Nick shakes his head 'no'
"It was Zane wasn't it? You don't have to protect him, He's always been shooting at you"
"No, Trust me...It wasn't him"
"Then who? Who besides Zane wants you dead?"
"I might have an idea"
The voice came from behind the curtain, Cradleman raised an eyebrow, he stood up and walked over to the curtain
"Pay no attention to the man behind the..."
Cradleman pulls it open, Sportsfan is in bed in a metal brace around his chest
"I always wanted to say that..."
-Meanwhile-
Zane and Juke pull up to the school, both get out.
"I'm guessing...You'll want to hold hands?"
Juke chuckles
"Zane, I might be gay but i'm not that gay"
Zane smiles in relief, Juke looks away, really wanting to do it
"Listen..."
Juke stops, Zane looks at him
"If you don't want to go through with this then we don't have to. I mean...I don't want to mess up your image or something amongst the ladies. I'm perfectly fine with going in alone, I'll dance with Nick or something"
Zane smiles, walking up to Juke
"If i didn't want to do this, I would of killed you along time ago. I want to do this...Live a day in a gay man's shoes besides Chicks love gay dudes, I hang around them and soon, hopefully i'll be sleeping with them"
Juke smiles, Zane offers his hand, Juke takes it and they both walk toward the gym, holding hands
"If you try to kiss me tonight, I'll rip your spine out"
-Meanwhile-
"It wasn't Zane, I heard Juke yell at Zane that he'll kill him with a FX Gun. Maybe he thought Zane would be at your place Nick, So we when there, Maybe he thought you were Zane and shot you"
"Juke is my friend, he wouldn't"
Nick explain to Sports
"I got something to confess"
Cradleman comes out and says
"Before you were shoot, i had an FX Gun....i was going to shoot myself Nick
The news causes more pain in Nick
"Why?"
"I was the one who spreaded the rumor of you being gay. I didn't realize it was gonna mess up your life. I thought it'll be funny. I didn't realize it would destroy you"
"Listen...It's okay, that's not even important right now...What's important is your alive..."
Cradleman nods, wiping the tears
"What did you do with the gun?"
"I left it outside the house, near the trash..."
"Someone must of saw you and took it"
"But Who?"
Cradleman asks
-Meanwhile-
Zane and Juke walk into the Prom, outside someone watches
Someone who hates me so much, they're willing to hurt the ones i care for....
Standing there, Watching Juke and Zane is Frostbite, He smiles and walks toward the prom
-End-
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Post by zane on Feb 22, 2010 20:18:00 GMT -6
DUN DUN DUN!!!
Thank you for finally posting it.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 22, 2010 20:26:40 GMT -6
Aw Zane...Your impatience makes me happy!
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Post by jukenami on Feb 22, 2010 20:35:22 GMT -6
Hahaaha.
I love this.
So.
So much.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 22, 2010 20:44:20 GMT -6
Thanks! I'll write another later than soon!
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Post by zane on Feb 22, 2010 21:40:24 GMT -6
O.o
I'm writing this from my DSi
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Post by Frostbite200 on Feb 22, 2010 22:53:24 GMT -6
Cool,And I don't care that you called me frostbite!
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Post by zane on Feb 23, 2010 4:03:04 GMT -6
.......
Still writing from my DSi.
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Post by Kranstin Kardashian on Feb 23, 2010 4:48:05 GMT -6
Still not caring.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 23, 2010 12:13:39 GMT -6
That's right you wanted to be called by another name. Damn i totally forgot
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Post by Frostbite200 on Feb 23, 2010 14:26:08 GMT -6
That's right you wanted to be called by another name. Damn i totally forgot No worries, just call me frostbite!
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 24, 2010 10:21:19 GMT -6
"I shoot the girl who did the previews..Zane Out!
Juke and Zane walk into gym where the techno music quickly travels through Juke causing him to shake his head with alittle hip movements, side to side. Zane smiles
"Wanna dance?"
Zane removes his hand
"No"
Zane walks off, Juke just stands there. He looks around for Nick
"Where is that bastard?"
Zane notices a group of people talking in the far corner, he walks over and decides to listen in, Meanwhile Zane walks over to the punch bowl and pours himself a drink. Standing next to him is a nerd, curly hair, thick black glasses and taller than sin.
"Please tell me this is spiked?"
The kid shrugs, Zane takes a drink and quickly tastes the alcohol. He drinks his whole cup, grabbing the large bowl and drinking from it
"Didn't realize you were gay Zane?"
Zane puts the bowl down and turns around, face is red but a smile is on his face, as soon as he sees who's talking to him, He's eyes get wide, smile gets lost and he stands in shock. Frostbite
"You..."
Frostbite smiles
"Me"
Frostbite grabs Zane by the collar and knees him in the crouch. Frostbite looks over at the nerd, who quickly looks away in fear
"Let's go talk Zane, Somewhere more private"
Frostbite drags Zane's body to the hall, where a couple made out and another started to feel each other in all the wrong places. Juke walks up to the crowd and listens in
"He was gay so it's not like it mattered!"
"Nick wasn't gay, why would he try to kill himself?"
Juke's heart skipped a beat, he stood there in silent, maybe he wanted to hear more or maybe he couldn't move. He was just quiet
"Well Kelly said Nick and Sportsfan were rushed to the hospital, maybe they fought and tried to kill eachother"
Juke ran off, He looked around the gym, seeing nothing but people dancing, making out, drinking and a fair amount of drug use.
"ZANE!...ZANE!...Sh!T, Where the hell is that guy?"
Juke ran out of the gym and to the parking lot. He saw a guy holding his bike, trying to impress a girl. He pushed the guy and takes the bike
"HEY THAT'S MY BIKE!"
"I JUST GTA'D YOUR ASS!"
Juke yells out
"damn it! he's right!"
Juke rides off into traffic, getting to the hospital at a high speed
-Meanwhile-
Zane is sitting in a chair, rope tied around him. Frostbite punches him across the face
"First Nick doesn't invite me to his house party....so i shot him!, second i'm not asked to go to the prom...so i'll shoot you!"
"Why do i affiliate with the prom?"
"SHUT UP!"
Frostbite punches him again, Zane starts laughing
"I'm guessing this is what Nickpick felt like when he was watching Superman Returns"
Frostbite thinks about it then chuckles
"Oh! getting beaten! nice!...He could say the same about watching Spider-Man 3....Anyway...SHUT UP!"
He punches Zane again
"I know what your thinking, Nick's house party? what a plot hole!, the viewers will be clueless on that event and guess what...I don't care!"
Frostbite punches him again, Zane gets angry
"I didn't even talk that time and stop punching for reasons that don't deserve being punched"
"Now Nick's dying and Sportsfan is hanging on to life"
"Wait...I heard SGK pushed Sportsfan"
SGK Attack walks up, smiling, hands in pocket
"Who do you think told SGK to do it?"
"SGK, you bastard...i always did hate your name!"
SGK punches Zane
"Well my name is better than yours!"
"My name is Zane, That's epic...yours is three letters followed by Attack. Oh that's genius. It's like Nickpick, WHAT DOES IT MEAN!"
"SGK! find Juke and kill him on sight!"
"You lay a finger on Juke, I'll kill you...i swear!"
SGK nods and walks off, Frostbite punches Zane, Frostbite leans close to Zane's face
"What's it feel like to see your whole world crush in front of you?"
"Juke isn't apart of this, Leave him out!"
"I DECIDED WHO STAYS OR LEAVES!"
Zane smiles
"That was a good one liner!"
"Thanks...Now SHUT UP!"
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 10:48:33 GMT -6
Fourth Wall breaking. Comedy. Action.
Nice.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 24, 2010 10:52:38 GMT -6
Thanks!
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 11:00:56 GMT -6
Hey. Hey Nick.
Never. Stop. Writing. One day you're gonna be famous for it.
*pats Nick's shoulder
That's a promise man.
(that sounded like something you'd say to someone who doesn't know that you're dying when you really are)
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Post by Frostbite200 on Feb 24, 2010 16:11:38 GMT -6
The boys from the land down under beat the crap out of EVERBODY!!!!!!
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 16:29:56 GMT -6
*shoots Frostbite
You were saying?
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Post by spideyfan914 on Feb 24, 2010 16:34:42 GMT -6
My Thoughts: - You look a little bit like me, actually.... ![:P](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/tongue.png) - I feel left out. ![:'(](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/cry.png) - Is this your way of coming out of the closet? ![;)](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/wink.png) - Blake and Zane make a cute couple. ![8-)](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/cool.png)
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Post by Frostbite200 on Feb 24, 2010 16:47:44 GMT -6
- Blake and Zane make a cute couple. ![8-)](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/cool.png) I was saying this zane ;D
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