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Post by Nickpick on Feb 19, 2010 21:14:01 GMT -6
Comments, Ideas or Chit Chat. All forms are welcomed. Let me know how and what i'm doing wrong (Which will be alot). |
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Post by zane on Feb 19, 2010 21:22:48 GMT -6
The first episode felt a little lacking. I was confused at first until I figured out it was an interview. It'd be nice if you could explain it. Even a little.
Besides that I've got no complaints. Nice job
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 19, 2010 21:42:15 GMT -6
Yeah, I knew i was gonna have trouble with the interview part. If you guys want i can rewrite the story, so that it's just a story and not like a interview kind of story.
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Post by zane on Feb 19, 2010 23:05:27 GMT -6
I like the interview format. It was just confusing at first because I didn't KNOW it'd be an interview
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 19, 2010 23:36:01 GMT -6
Thanks and i'll make it more understandable next time!
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Post by zane on Feb 19, 2010 23:36:52 GMT -6
S'alright and thanks
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Post by sportsfan23 on Feb 20, 2010 11:23:30 GMT -6
Nick, pilots of a series are the hardest to write, because you have to introduce the characters, and get the feel...of all the great stories you've written, this is easily the best "first episode" you've written...
I do agree with Zane, if I didn't come here first, I would've been confused, It was great though!
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 20, 2010 12:27:49 GMT -6
Thanks! that's so cool to hear...now i got to live up to the pilot
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Post by zane on Feb 20, 2010 14:19:27 GMT -6
Live up to it? No. You have to exceed it in every way possible. That's what writers do Nick. If they didn't, nobody would be watching TV now would they/
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 20, 2010 20:37:32 GMT -6
You know what i meant! Writers need to bring something new to the table for each episode, each episode isn't going to be good as the first and i accept that. But i think if you can be in the right state of mind as i was when i was writing this pilot then i could make a good series
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Post by zane on Feb 20, 2010 20:39:14 GMT -6
I'm only in a writing mood when my conditions are met:
*Well fed
*Bored
*Excited
*Recently showered (I get my best ideas when I'm in water)
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 20, 2010 21:09:25 GMT -6
Oddly enough i do too....(There's something in the water)
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Post by sportsfan23 on Feb 21, 2010 0:32:35 GMT -6
obviously, I've just wrote a whole bunch after my snack, shower, and after being bored all night.
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Post by zane on Feb 21, 2010 8:57:06 GMT -6
I think that it's just the warm water running on and off of you that relaxes you enough to think of something good.
That's why nobody gets ideas in Baths. The water just stays around you.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 21, 2010 11:23:17 GMT -6
Down with Baths, Up with Showers
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Post by zane on Feb 21, 2010 12:11:43 GMT -6
I'm remaining neutral in that battle.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 22, 2010 13:16:55 GMT -6
New Episode! Enjoy!
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Post by sportsfan23 on Feb 22, 2010 13:59:33 GMT -6
Loved it, Nick, great writing!
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Post by zane on Feb 22, 2010 16:43:27 GMT -6
Excellent. Exceeds the pilot in every way. Except, for the fact that the pilot gets you excited about the series, the second episode is just curbing the excitement a little.
In other words. Good episode. I like my character's background
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 22, 2010 17:23:34 GMT -6
Well it's gonna go more in depth with each character, very little is known about their real life. I plan on addressing each character's background but thanks!
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