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Post by zane on Feb 23, 2010 23:08:00 GMT -6
Got any comments. Put them here.
As for the pilot. I admit not my best work considering the big hiatus. I was really focusing more introducing the characters then starting the story. No worries, they do get better. Still, I hope you like the extra detail.
The finale for the pilot comes out after I have some breakfast. So I'd say around 10-12 AM.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Feb 24, 2010 2:39:30 GMT -6
I like it! Though I feel that there is a thing as to much detail! Still great and I love how it short so as to make it easy to follow!
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 10:43:56 GMT -6
Thanks.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Feb 24, 2010 13:38:25 GMT -6
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Post by Frostbite200 on Mar 7, 2010 12:47:45 GMT -6
Next one?
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Post by zane on Mar 7, 2010 20:38:07 GMT -6
When I feel like it.
Really, the only times I write are when I'm REALLY in the mood to do so.
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