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Post by Nickpick on Mar 7, 2010 17:20:01 GMT -6
Orchard Of Mines The SummaryA story about a kidnapped 7 year old who returns 10 years later. Unable to speak, His secret is deadly including where he was. While others are happy to have him back, Some people like his mother will soon realize this isn't her son anymore. The story is mainly focused on emotions i felt when writing it. It won't affect The Fear. It's a short story i feel like telling. When i've finished it. I'll focus on an old show on mine, one you guys want back. |
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Post by cradleman on Mar 8, 2010 0:09:44 GMT -6
very interested in this one. letting your emotions control your writing usually gives a different style than usual, but it sometimes can produce even better writing. I'm really excited to see how this turns out.
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Post by sportsfan23 on Mar 8, 2010 17:27:57 GMT -6
^this
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Post by zane on Mar 8, 2010 18:14:23 GMT -6
^this
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 9, 2010 16:43:41 GMT -6
"The Road To Redemption...Is A Mystery...Follow Or Your Heart...Or Die...Love...Or Death....Living...Is...Hard...Dying...Is Harder"
Orchard Of Mines
Coming Soon |
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Post by zane on Mar 9, 2010 16:46:57 GMT -6
I've heard all of those metaphors before.
But in a sentence?
Good premise.
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Post by sportsfan23 on Mar 9, 2010 16:55:58 GMT -6
I AM SOOOO excited for this!
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 9, 2010 22:37:14 GMT -6
Lol! thanks! i'll post another teaser than the first episode will be posted in days
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 17, 2010 11:14:39 GMT -6
"And I wish that I could tell you right now, I love you. But it looks like I won't be around."
-Brand New-
-2009-
"I've read the story about the man who sacrificed his son for the good of mankind. Faith was something i didn't quiet understand. I've never prayed, i don't know what it feels like to trust someone I've never seen. To have the firm believe that i was being watched and cared for...
A 17 year old, black hair that's short with bright blue eyes lays in his bed as his surroundings get bright white. so bright they burn his eyes but he feels no pain. He just smiles
"Or maybe i was being watched and i just didn't know it."
-1997-
"My story is much different from anyone else's. I had a happy little family full of dirty little secrets. Stay at home mom that loved busy working dad until busy working dad decided to sleep with his nasty secretary, Stay at home mom divorced busy working dad. Leaving me, an only child with my mother. I didn't hate them...it anyone i didn't feel much about it. I wasn't a child that expressed much emotion. I guess i didn't know how or i was yet to understand it. I feel of crying because i was hurt was alien to me. By there was one day...one day in my life i remember crying and feeling heart break...It's was my 7th birthday"
-Just a teaser, full episode soon- |
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