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Post by Nickpick on Mar 9, 2010 23:32:50 GMT -6
www.youtube.com/watch?v=gkChXmC-IZ4Everything is black, no glimpse of light. A quick flash between all the character. Zane, Kara, Ben, Nano, Drakus, Drake and Nick with purple marks around his neck standing in the middle of the darkness, staring toward us. It flashes again and Nick is standing there
"In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth."
It flashes again and Zane is standing there
"Now the earth was formless and empty, darkness was over the surface of the deep, and the Spirit of God was hovering over the waters."
It flashes again ending on Kara
"And God said, "Let there be light," and there was light."
It flashes again but this time, doves are seen flying behind Nano
"God saw that the light was good, and He separated the light from the darkness. God called the light "day," and the darkness he called "night.""
Images of Zane choking Nick appears behind Zane and Nick as they stare at each other when another image from the new season is shown. It shows Nano showing Zane buildings and people down below him, one arm around Zane as Zane stares down from the moutain top
""Then he will say to those on his left, 'Depart from me, you who are cursed, into the eternal fire prepared for the devil and his angels"
Another flash shows Ben and Drake on the floor with people standing over them. Ben and Drake stare at each other while the images play out behind them
"Then Jesus replied, "Have I not chosen you, the Twelve? Yet one of you is a devil!""
All the character are shown in another flash, Nano smiles as each character falls to their knees in pain
"So God said to Noah, "I am going to put an end to all people, for the earth is filled with violence because of them. I am surely going to destroy both them and the earth"
Tactics Season 3...Coming Soon
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Post by zane on Mar 10, 2010 6:06:31 GMT -6
An excellent opener. I'll write my episode after school. Till' then. Go nuts
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 10, 2010 9:53:53 GMT -6
it wasn't an opener, it was a teaser
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 10, 2010 12:15:18 GMT -6
www.youtube.com/watch?v=LlvUepMa31o"How do i pay respect to a man i help kill?"
Nano stares down at the tombstone, wearing an all black suit. He gently tosses the white flower on Nick's grave.
"how do i pay respect when i never had any for this man? he threatened my future. The world i wished to have, A new world where the right to be god...was mine"
Nano turns around, standing behind him, far from him, on top of a hill, stood Zane. wearing an all black suit, leaning against a shady tree as the wind started to get heavy
"A new threat is in my horizon...how do i approach this? like i have in the past 5 months. I've played a reckless game and the price i paid was an arm"
Nano starts down at his robotic hand, it respones to everything like a normal hand, he looks back toward Zane but he's gone
"I've let time heal the wounds, bandage them to a specific core in which i have control. I've let Life become peaceful and again...peace is the mind's worst enemy. So i stop questioning my motives and just react...Nick saw a bright future where his death would be my victory. But not anymore The future isn't known and what the outcome is still remains unanswered...It still remains...
BANG! BANG!
Two shots go off as Nano walked away. blood quickly squirts out from Nano's chest, Nano is motionless as he looks down at his wounds. Nano drops to his knees then hits the ground, face first. Dead
"Life is cruel, your tortured then you die. It's quick and painful and might to sting...I've turned away from that life but now...i've accepted who i am, what i will become...and it's not a monster, My name is Tiven(TIE-VEN) and i just killed the only man with all the answers i needed"
Tiven stands 6'1, wearing a black suit with a coat over it. holding a revolver in one hand. hair is brown that ends at his ears, it's also curly with a strand of white where his bangs are
"Nano was a monster, a man bent on the idea of a New World...i don't wish to save this world...i want to see it end"
Tiven walks off as the music hits it last note
Tactics
www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ni-BXD7hmT0
The school bell rings forcing all the kids to rush to their class like roaches trying to out run a foot. The teacher has her back to the kids full of nothing but 14 through 16 years olds.
"My name is Mrs. Richardson and i'll be your sub until Mr. Roberts comes back from his honeymoon and it's my understanding..."
She turns toward the class, she's old. Maybe 61 with all silver hair in a bun and large glasses with a black shirt with a maroon vest over it and a brown skirt with fishnet stockings and 5 inch heels that had her over look the class.
"We have a new student...will..."
She scanned a piece of paper on her desk then looked back at the class
"Will Jason Flynn please introduce yourself?"
From the middle of the class stands a 5'9, average kid with dark brown hair that is spiked in the front. wearing a grey shirt and black jacket over it and cargo pants. He stands and quickly all the coins in his pocket drop to the floor making noise as it does
"Damn"
"What was that?"
"Um..nothing"
Kids started to pick up the change and stuff it in their pockets
"Um yeah I'm Jason Flynn, I'm 15 and i don't know...thanks for having me at your school?"
The teacher was doing her best to control her temper, she jerks her head toward the seat, Jason takes a seat causing his backpack to fall off his chair, he reaches over to pick it up when he sees a pair of legs underneath the desk behind him. skin looked smooth and soft. she wore pink chucks with her pink skirt. Jason's eyes scanned up her legs, he was in awe of the beauty of these legs.He spotted her pink panties underneath her skirt and a break of sweat broke off from his head. Sam, black with short hair wearing a white shirt with the school jacket over it with black jeans and red shoes. spots Jason and quickly breaks him out of his situation by grabbing a pencil and acting as he it flew off his desk
"Agh"
Jason quickly sits up from his seat, he looks over at Sam, Sam eyes jerk to the teacher, Jason nods, he then turns around to the girl behind him. Stacy Ronz with long plantinum blond hair with beautiful blue eyes that had their attention on a piece of paper on her desk, she notices someone staring at her, she looks up at Jason
"New kid...your staring"
Jason snaps out of it
"Sorry"
He whispered back, she smiled
"Sorry is when i grab this pencil and jam it in your eyes"
Jason let the image play out in his head, he looks away, Sam holds back a laugh.
-6 hours later-
Schools over and Jason and Sam walk out from the building of Saint Nicholas High School. both with their backpacks on.
"Pink huh? damn that sounds hot..."
"It's not her panties or even her legs that had me drawn in...it was a scar she hid with her long ass socks."
They walk down the sidewalk
"It's the same scar i have in the same place, same looks and everything"
"So what? You think she's your sister or something? in that case you just say your sister's panties, that's nasty man!"
"JUST...just listen to me...i don't think she's my sister, i gave up that search along time ago...i think she's apart of The Accident that happened 5 months ago"
"Oh.."
Sam walks off, wanting not to hear this story again
"Your believe that the world ended and you were caught by some resistance team? I'm a fan of a good science fiction story but this is something you might want to take to James Cameron"
Jason stops Sam
"listen, the nightmares...the strange drawings i wake up to with no memory of drawing them. The fact i've waken up twice across the state...something happened to me 5 months ago, two days before my birthday...whatever must have happened, happened to Stacy too"
"Okay well when martians start flying let me know, until then...let me know how the chat with James Cameron goes"
Sam walks off, Jason sighs
"Does anyone believe me?"
Jason looks over at the end of the street where he sees a man with a black coat staring at him. Jason focuses, trying his best not to blink and instead tries focusing on the guy, finally a gush of wind hits Jason causing him to blink when he opens his eyes the man is gone...
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Post by zane on Mar 11, 2010 19:27:06 GMT -6
Jason feels a chill going down his spine. He turns around, fear entering his body. Suddenly, he bumps into Zane.
Who are you?
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 11, 2010 21:22:31 GMT -6
-Antarctica-
She held her gun tight in her hands, her left hand brushes against the top, near the barrel as she wears her white coat with fur around the hoodie. She stands up and puts it her holster. Suddenly the opening to the tent is pushed open, standing there is a man wearing a black coat with fur around the hood with black rimmed glasses, black hair and blue eyes with a worked out body, two shotguns in their holster on his hips and a bow and arrow on his back.
"Kara!"
Kara looks over at him, hair is longer, darker from it's original look. She's had a birthday that came and went.
"What is Jacob?"
"Code Blue"
They hurry outside where a group of people are circled around a guy with a cut on his chest, blood stains the ice, Kara rushes to him
"I need the first aid...What happened?"
"I was scouting near the river when i slipped and got cut by my own knife"
Kara looks at him the back at the wound, she knew something different was up. Jacob hands the first aid to Kara, She takes out a syringe. She looks back at the others, she needed a plan
"Jacob, Bring me a blanket, the rest...head to the river, clean the blood...if 'they' smell it then our operation is over...move!"
They rest off, leaving Kara and the 27 year old man, dark brown hair with different silver hairs growing. brown eyes with a 5 o'clock shadow, heavily growing. Kara sticks the needle in her arm
"What your about to see...."
She drains her blood into the syringe
"You will never speak of or i'll find you...and kill you myself"
She takes the needle out and sticks it near the wound and injects the blood, quickly healing the wound. The man smiles, Kara takes her gun out and aims it at the man's forehead
"There are no teams near the river, Who are you?"
the man smiles and stands up, Kara kept her gun on him
"Your smart and caught on quick, you must of already knew i didn't need your blood to heal, which is why i didn't bother hiding my shadow"
Kara spots over at the man's shadow revealing a pair of wings. She looks back at him
"Who are you?"
"You have 10 seconds before Jacob returns, how do you think he'll react with that gun in my face?"
She kept it there for a second then slowly dropped it
"My name is Tiven, I'm here to help"
"I'm fine and dandy"
"I'm not here to help just you...i'm here to help the world"
"What?"
"I bandaged him up, it'll stop the bleeding but i want to stitch him up, alone...say it....now!"
Jacob turns the corner, Kara locks her gun in her holster
"Woah...What happened?"
"I bandaged him up, it'll stop the bleeding but i want to stitch him up, alone...in my tent."
"Oh okay, Here's the blanket"
Jacob wraps it around the man, the man just stares at Kara
"Okay, Well i'll catch up with the other team"
"Good"
Kara and the man walk off
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Post by zane on Mar 12, 2010 6:33:12 GMT -6
No. Forget it. Kid, you're not worth my time.
Zane disappears as quickly as he had come into the picture. He is seen over an ocean, flying south
I've found you Tiven. The last threat will be destroyed. So I swear.
Antartica. 20 miles away from Kara's camp (this may be hard to read. Just highlight it if you have trouble)
He's on his way. Finally I'll have my vengeance
The words game from a man wearing a white cloak and a white turban sprawled across his head. His face was unseen, however a scar could be seen poking through the turban. He was a tall man, but he seemed weak. He stared northward, through binoculars.
Antarctic Ocean
Zane finally sees Antarctica and prepares to land. His wings grow shorter as he gets closer.
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 12, 2010 12:35:45 GMT -6
Tiven and Kara where in her tent, he sat on his cot, she on hers
"Your thoughts run wild"
Kara looked over at Tiven, face wasn't to pleased
"Your reading them?"
"No, But i could if you want"
"Listen..."
She turns toward him, taking a seat on her cot while he sat on his.
"Your yet to tell me what your..."
"Zane...Why do hide from him?"
She smirks
"I thought you weren't reading my thoughts"
"I slipped"
He smiled, She looked down, staring at the rock hard ice below her feet
"5 months ago, my best friend died and two of my other best friends went missing. When i found Zane, He told me of what he done and i hated him for it. I left him to fight for his own while i searched for Ben and Drake but....i never found them. When i did find a clue to where they were, i was captured by this Resistance Team called Argo, they told me they want me to help them in return they would help me find my friends. My life had nothing in to be against it so...i joined them. 4 months in i was sent here, Why? I don't know but it's my mission"
"They've lied to you"
She smiles as she looks up at him
"They caught your friends"
the word rush out from Tiven
"Yeah, i knew that for about 2 months now but i kept it to myself, doing my own research to find them"
"I know where they are"
She stands up, shocked by what Tiven is saying
"Where?"
She takes a seat next to him, he smiles
"But sitting next to me that shows me you have a certain amount of trust. in return i'll tell you there location...but first i must warn you"
"Warn me?"
"Zane was just outside your tent"
She stands, taking her gun out and cocking it
"It's okay, He's not even close anymore, soon as your eyes left the ground, i changed our location."
"Where are we?"
She peeked outside the window, revealing beautiful cherry blossom trees and a river with water,crystal clear. Tiven stepped outside
"Japan, 1946.."
Kara looked at Tiven
"Why did you send me to the past?"
"I'll tell you why under one condition..."
"What's that?"
"All i ask is that you join me, Nano wants a new world but i don't...i just want thing to remain the same"
She looked down, deciding but she already knew the answer. She looked back at him
"Okay, I'm in"
Tiven smiled
"We're here because this is were Ben and Drake are being held"
-Meanwhile, In the present-
Jacob looked around
"KARA!...KARA!"
Zane heard Jacob yelling out her name
"KARA!"
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Post by zane on Mar 12, 2010 17:37:43 GMT -6
A split second later, Zane appears before Jacob, he grabs Jake by the neck and begins to choke him
Where is she?! HOW DO YOU KNOW HER?!
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 12, 2010 18:28:56 GMT -6
Jason Flynn questioned today, all the events. Everything that's happened lately. He walks into his lawn where he sees Stacy sitting on his front porch steps, She stands as soon as she sees him
"Stacy?"
She walks up to him
"What? how did you know where i lived?"
"I asked Sam...anyway, That man you were talking to...the one who bumped into you. Who is he?"
"I'm not sure, he didn't say. Why?"
Besides the fact Stacy had the same scar as him, he also found her beautiful. She looks away
"Damn"
"What?"
"The man...he...nevermind it's stupid"
"Then your talking to the right guy"
She looks at Jason
"I've seen that man in several dreams of mine, i've seen him..i know i have but i never met him"
That second Jason knew they were connected.He got down and pulled his left pant leg up, revealing his scar
"I know you have the same scar, in my dreams...i see things, places..draw these people, these places...i've never met nor seen...We're connected somehow, some...way...whatever happened, happened to us"
She quickly wraps her arms around him, tears coming to her eyes
-Meanwhile-
Jake is off his feet as Zane rises him up by his throat
"I don't know...I...she took that...that man in her tent then they were gone the next second"
-Meanwhile-
He reaches out as he pushes himself up.
"That...bastard..."
He stood up, holding his chest
"Used...Galvara(Gal-Vara)"
Nano reaches into his wounds and pulls the bullets out and throws it aside as the wounds heal
"Damn it!"
Nano walks off, stepping on the flower
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Post by zane on Mar 14, 2010 14:23:47 GMT -6
Zane throws Jake into the ground
Damn. So close. I'll find them. I'll find the three of them.
Zane takes off, leaving Jake in the middle of the icy Antarctic area
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 14, 2010 16:59:09 GMT -6
Jason sits outside the bathroom, leaning against the wall as the shower shuts off and door opens, Jason looks over and Stacy is wearing a towel around her body as it glistens with remaining water and steam exits the bathroom. She smiles as he looks away
"I'm sorry, i was staring"
"It's okay...So can i change your room?"
"Yeah, I laid some clothes in there that use to belong to my sis..umm..yeah there on my bed"
She walks off into Jason's room before turning around and turning toward him and smiles a sincere smile
"Thank you...for this, for everything"
He smiles with his lips and nods, she turns and closes the down. There's 3 knocks on the front door, Jason walks down the stairs and opens the door where Sam holds his books and backpack
"I hate math...I mean if Mrs.Hair-Nose wants to..."
"Dude...Dude"
"What?"
Jason whispers at Sam, Sam whispers back as they lean in
"Stacy...Stacy Stacy...Is in my room right now...naked"
Sam's eye get wide with shock, he quickly rushes up the stairs before Jason grabs his leg both on the stairs struggling as Jason pulls Sam, stopping him "Stop!"
"I wanna to see her!"
Jason gets one good tug pulling him down to the bottom
"Fine!..aw! Why not?"
"Because.."
"Did you...did you bonk her?"
"No..No, she was here when i got here, turns out she has weird dreams like me...You see my dreams do mean something"
"Oh...You should of just told me you bonked her, i would of believed you"
"Dude...we're share the same dream! This is better then sex"
"What are you guys talking about?"
Stacy stood on top of the stair case, wearing dark blue jeans with slip on black chucks with a black spigetti strap with a blue and black flannel button up. hair was down and she looked...beautiful, she looked like Kara but younger. She combs her hair behind her ear, they guys stare at her
"Woah"
-Meanwhile-
Kara looks down into the water, your image stares back as a cherry blossom pedal falls on the water, it carries it
"Ben and Drake are in 1903 Japan...Why would The Resistance take them back here...this far"
Kara said, Tiven sat under a cherry blossom tree. where the shade cooled him
"Same reason why i recruited you, their also recruiting...When i was a child, I was told stories...of angels who rebelled from Heaven and were sent down,falling from grace into Japan. Well this year...this was the year they fell. The Resistance is trying to recruit a man by the name of Arctus, A japanese man who holds the ability of time. We find him before they do...we have a chance of finding your friends"
Kara looks over at Tiven and nods
"Then lets find them"
-Meanwhile-
Nano walks into a large office room, busting through the double doors. The room was as big as a floor. A desk and chair at the end that was made for Nano was being sat in. Nano is angry as he holds takes his gloves off, his shirt is ripped open with tiny whole from the shotgun blast. Nano stops when he sees a pair of shoes on his desk
"Zane, Honestly...If that's you...then i'll rip you damn heart out"
The chair turns around and the person sitting in the chair even leaves Nano breathless
"You...It's impossible"
"No..My friend...It's not"
The person in the chair wore a white tuxedo. He stood up and walked toward Nano, Nano stood still in fear, feeling this for the first time
"You see...I was the first to fall, the first to lead this planet to it's fall and i will do it...through you, through this host who was..powerful enough to hold me"
He stood in front of Nano and gently brushed his hand against Nano's face and smiles
"Tiven plans on letting this world continue rotting like the corpse it is."
"What do you want from me?"
"What i want is for you to go through with you mission, My child...for you to destroy this planet and create a new world that's better suit for us"
"Your powerful enough to do it yourself, just do it...right now"
"Is wish i could...but it's not time yet, where love, fear,sadness and hate are joined as one then i'll be ready...until then...i lack the power"
"Then let's create a new world"
Nano smile, the other person smiled a familar smile as the day grew to night
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Post by zane on Mar 14, 2010 17:54:23 GMT -6
Japan. 1903. A young boy plays in the street. He's not Japanese, probably vacationing there. He looks like Zane, but around 9 years old. He wanders around. Searching for a toy. Suddenly, the boy witnesses lightning emerge from an alleyway nearby. He walks into it. Inside, is Zane.
Hey there, little me.
Who're you?
You. From the Future. And kid, I've got a ton of stuff to tell you.
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 15, 2010 1:19:14 GMT -6
-Japan,1903-
Kara walked into the busy streets of Japan, people sold food, some offer their personal services. Kara ignored it all, stares fill her whole body. her appearance, her clothes and her beauty.
"Excuse me..''
Kara turns around, standing there is a blond man, skin is white and eyes are green. He's 6'1 and has an average body. He smiles at Kara
"My name is Travis Foster and right now, not a soul here understands what we are saying. So listen to me and i won't have to give the single to the sniper two stories above you with his aim, perfectly on your head to shoot you and end your mission once and for all"
Kara stands still, face expresses anger, he holds the gun in his holster
"Where's Drake and Ben?"
"If i could guess, they right under you..."
Kara looks down with her eyes
"Oh we know about your abilities and trust us, we've created something that makes you as normal as the rest of these people"
He pulls out a necklace, a glowing blue stone that glowed. Kara realized her powers were locked. She looked at Travis with narrow eyes
"Kara, They're bluffing, they wouldn't shoot you in front of these people...their bunkers"
Tiven walks off, Kara replies
"Bunkers?"
"Resistance agents sent through time to do the resistances dirty work. This is Travis Foster. Leader of The Bunkers"
Travis smiles a cocky smile
"He also knows that in this community they're looked up to,like gods...so killing someone in public is something they wouldn't do"
Tiven wore a long black leather coat, his hands weren't in the sleeves, they held his wound as he slowly heals
"Tiven, Why are you here?"
"You've met?"
Tiven smiles
"Travis has been hunting me down for 5 years, he's the reason i was hurt. He found me and shot me with a Galvara bullet, a special metal that hurts people like me."
"Filthy cheating healers...Why are you here?"
"We know your searching for the boy...we'll make you an offer? His location for the two?"
"You know the travelers location?"
"Yes..."
Travis smirks
"Bring them up!"
Two large built guard walk away, chains are heard as Kara listens as they approach. They appear with black bags over their heads, clothes are dirty and filthy, they're chained by the feet and hands in front of them.
"Inside, this exchange can't be made public"
Tiven and Kara walk inside, Travis clothes a door in the modern looking prison.
"Now before we hand them over, His location?"
"Near the river, last house at the end of the block"
"If this is false information, I'm coming for you Tiven"
"It's the truth"
Travis nods, his men march off and he follows. Kara grips Ben's black bag and yanks it off, revealing Ben's face. dirty, black and eyes closed. Tiven removes the other with a slight movement of his hands and Drake stands there, dirty also.
"Guys?"
Kara is to the point of tears as her hands become unable to control. Ben and Drake open their eyes, letting them adjust for a second before they see Kara, the two have matured, Tiven does another sly movement and the chains fall to the floor, Ben and Drake quickly hug Kara
"I thought we'd never see you...i was so worried that Nano got you and..."
Ben continues to ramble as Drake smiles at her
"Wow! you've grown more beautiful"
She smacks Drake's chest
"I see 5 months of prison did nothing to that mouth"
She smiles at them
"It's good to see you two..."
"It's good to be back"
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Post by zane on Mar 15, 2010 17:01:42 GMT -6
Fires break out. People scream and die. At the epicenter of it all is Young Zane. With anger and rage in his eye. Nearby, Zane watched himself do these horrible deeds.
Show them who you are. Show them your power!
Young Zane screamed. His anger caused fires to spread from his feet to the first thing they touched. A gas station. Chaos continued as YZ destroyed and burned, with Zane fueling his rage.
(in head)This outta drive 'em out
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 16, 2010 1:25:11 GMT -6
(A gas station in 1903? wow! that's new)
The explosions gets everyone's attention
"We must hurry"
Kara said
"Ben, Drake...Our...um...tent is near the river, follow it up and you'll find it. Get inside..."
"What about you?"
"She'll be fine, Kara...you must go with your friends, I'll follow shortly behind"
"Who is doing this?"
"A friend"
Tiven walked off, Kara sighs and runs off with Drake and Ben. Tiven stared at a 7 year old boy that ran toward him. Tiven stopped him and placed his hand on his shoulder, the boy looked up at him
"2010...A man named Nano..
He spoke the rest in the boy's ear, he used an ability so the boy would always remember. Tiven walked off and went near the explosions, the source of all it was a child. Tiven smiled and held his hand open, sending out a white light, revealing Zane
"Zane, I knew you were behind this...how you found out about your true human self remains a mystery to me. Stop this...these people are innocent, no blood has been shed yet, no war has tasted these ground so please...don't make me kill you"
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Post by zane on Mar 16, 2010 5:07:59 GMT -6
(they were around. 3 Years later they helped start the San Francisco Disaster/Earthquake)
No. These people are fools and liars. They must be eviscerated. Just like you.
Zane tackles Tiven. Meanwhile, Young Zane (BTW he's 9 not 7) continued attacking the people. Eventually chancing upon a river. He walked up the river. Coming across a tent.
Young Zane: You all must die.
Young Zane sets the tent ablaze.
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 16, 2010 12:09:09 GMT -6
(The 7 year old was a different child, it's obvious when he talks to him before he talks to your character)
The tent burned to the ground with nobody inside, Young Zane turned around and Kara hit him over the head with her gun, knocking the boy out. Kara turns around, Ben and Drake are gone suddenly a white flash hits her and she's gone as well.
-Meanwhile-
Tiven simply pushes Zane off him, he goes flying back but lands perfectly on his feet. Tiven gets up and in a flash he's infront of Zane, He grabs Zane neck with one hand and with the other he places his index finger and his middle finger to his forehead, closing his eyes
"Heavenly father, send this creation back to his time and i pray you return this time to how it was before we arrived. these innocent shall not know of our existances."
The sky turns all white. It glows as Zane gets pulled away into the whiteness, Tiven stands there when someone runs past him, he's gone.
-Present-
Kara appears on the hard road, on her knees. vomitting as Ben and Drake rush to her aid
"You alright?"
"I'm glad none of us can teleport..."
She gets up and wipes her mouth when Tiven appears infront of them. His tall figure stares at them as Ben and Drake stare back
"Thank you Tiven, for everything"
He nods, Ben walks up to him and offers his hand
"We are in your debt"
"Right"
Drake says, making a fist. Tiven smiles
"All i ask is for your assistances when i return, to fight along side me"
"Consider it done"
Drake and Ben recruit to Tiven's side. Kara walks up
"Where you going?"
"Zane is blinded by darkness, he hunts like an animal from the damage Nano has done to him. I will light his way, i will recruit him to our side, make things...better for him. Until i see you again, stay safe"
A gush of wind hits Ben, Drake and Kara forcing them to close their eyes when they open them, Tiven is gone.
-Meanwhile-
Zane falls to the ground from a white glowing light, he's on his knees, coughing when he hears clapping from behind him
"Like an angel desending from heaven but you are hardly an angel...your more like...a demon"
Zane turns around, standing there is Nano, still wearing his black suit, Nano smiles
"Hello Zane"
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Post by zane on Mar 16, 2010 17:56:34 GMT -6
You.......
Zane curls his hands into fists
What do YOU want?
MEANWHILE.....
Young Zane is shown running. The white flash moves outward and consumes everyone it touches to the point where they were before the group came. Suddenly, a portal is opened up and Young Zane is swallowed into it. He emerges, in a modern city. Near him, is the Creator.
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 16, 2010 23:07:37 GMT -6
Zane rushes as Nano to punch him across the face but Nano is gone, He stands on the other side of the street.
"I'm not here to offer a fight, quite the opposite actually..I've come here to offer you a position on team Nano..."
"What makes you think I'd ever help you?"
Zane takes another swing at Nano but as soon as he gets close to him, everything, the area around them changes. They're on a window mountain top, staring down at the city below them
"Because i offer you access and part of my new world. Having people...live and breath for your rights, the rules you put down..let the people fear you and let fear consume them forever. I offer you what the others can't...a second chance to change everything...the resistance wants a war and we want peace. Believe it or not...we're the good guys in this fight. Zane...Our fight in the past...consider it a mistake, you have my word that if you accept my offer, I'll give you the one thing you want...revenge, revenge on those who made you a warrior, you made your life nothing but a battlefield..."
Zane looks at Nano, the area returns to normal. They are back in the middle of the empty street, in the middle of the day
"If you decline then you'll be considered an enemy and part of the resistance. Zane, If you don't accept what i have to say then at least let me take you to someone who will change your life..."
Nano had begging in his eyes but didn't show it, Zane stared at Nano, weighting his options
-Meanwhile-
Tiven walks into the city, where people live their normal, boring lives. He sighs and takes the alley through the city when he hears a pair of feet walk through a puddle. Tiven smiles and turns around with a smile on his face
"I was told you weren't to interfere in our work and taking over the dead...that's just low"
"Hello Tiven, It's been awhile hasn't it"
The man smiles, yet to reveal his full face but his smile is familar
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