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Post by Nickpick on Mar 10, 2010 22:32:13 GMT -6
"We're open to yours ideas....THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!" anyway, got a question then ask, or a comment then tell us. we're looking for way to improve our stories. |
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Post by sportsfan23 on Mar 10, 2010 22:52:06 GMT -6
i have a way to improve your stories... get rid of the superman picture  |
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 10, 2010 23:00:19 GMT -6
hahah! for that...i'm gonna make it worse lol...not the story but my signature
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Post by Kranstin Kardashian on Mar 10, 2010 23:09:18 GMT -6
Or you could do both.
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 11, 2010 10:51:04 GMT -6
Noted SGK  Noted |
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 15, 2010 1:26:27 GMT -6
THE FEAR WILL BE ON BREAK UNTIL JUKE WRITES HIS EPISODE!
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Post by sportsfan23 on Mar 15, 2010 18:14:52 GMT -6
hint hint, Juke...HAHA
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Post by cradleman on Mar 15, 2010 19:23:36 GMT -6
Just read the pilot. I enjoyed it. the story is intriguing, and i can feel the emotions. One picky comment, make sure you don't switch back and forth between third and first person. you did it a couple times, and it was a tad distracting. but otherwise i liked it alot. Now Blake, write your episode!
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Post by Nickpick on Mar 16, 2010 0:36:55 GMT -6
ha! i just noticed that...sorry! it was probably meant to be in first person then i accident switched to third, it won't happen again
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Post by cradleman on Mar 16, 2010 12:10:47 GMT -6
gotcha. it's not a big deal to me, i just noticed it. still really liked it though. |
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Noted
