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Post by Nickpick on Jul 8, 2010 17:40:56 GMT -6
Damn, remind me never to doubt you again! i was reading episode 2 thinking this episode is going no where until i got to the end and it all because awesome! great episode! your a natural writer and you put me to shame lol good work!
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Post by spideyfan914 on Jul 8, 2010 20:43:12 GMT -6
Well, it's 18 minutes (when I checked the times), and there are 10 chapters, but the last one is double-triple length, plus the first of season three, so I figured 12 chapters. 18/12 is a simple 1.5 - that's pretty simple, really.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jul 9, 2010 21:27:59 GMT -6
I've just finished episodes 1 & 2, (awesome dialogue!) did you rewrite episode 1?
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Post by spideyfan914 on Jul 9, 2010 22:15:26 GMT -6
Nope, except for the names.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jul 9, 2010 22:20:22 GMT -6
Nope, except for the names. OH, i could have sworn you had...shows how much attention I paid to it the first!
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Post by spideyfan914 on Jul 10, 2010 16:13:33 GMT -6
Damn, remind me never to doubt you again! i was reading episode 2 thinking this episode is going no where until i got to the end and it all because awesome! great episode! your a natural writer and you put me to shame lol good work! Lol, the hangman stuff comes back. Eventually.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jul 10, 2010 16:32:09 GMT -6
Damn, remind me never to doubt you again! i was reading episode 2 thinking this episode is going no where until i got to the end and it all because awesome! great episode! your a natural writer and you put me to shame lol good work! Lol, the hangman stuff comes back. Eventually. I figured you would use the word "Rhythm' for something later on.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jul 12, 2010 16:11:04 GMT -6
I read ep 3 yesterday!, loved it. Though I would have liked the title "Whispers" as apposed to "Shock".
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Post by spideyfan914 on Jul 12, 2010 20:33:05 GMT -6
Hm.... That sounds more like a name for the whole season.... Lol.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jul 13, 2010 2:21:12 GMT -6
Hm.... That sounds more like a name for the whole season.... Lol. Not sure I understand that?, you tend to use 3-4 word title for your seasons.
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Post by spideyfan914 on Jul 13, 2010 10:36:03 GMT -6
Hm.... That sounds more like a name for the whole season.... Lol. Not sure I understand that?, you tend to use 3-4 word title for your seasons. Uh, I meant that the theme of whispers could be counted toward a lot more than just that chapter.... They're all stuck in a room together - the only way to have private conversation is through whispers. Though I do agree that yes, it would've been a cool name, but whatever. Look, just - just never mind. Okay?
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jul 13, 2010 16:28:18 GMT -6
Not sure I understand that?, you tend to use 3-4 word title for your seasons. Uh, I meant that the theme of whispers could be counted toward a lot more than just that chapter.... They're all stuck in a room together - the only way to have private conversation is through whispers. Though I do agree that yes, it would've been a cool name, but whatever. Look, just - just never mind. Okay? I see what you mean now! BTW do you have an over all title for season 1?
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Post by spideyfan914 on Jul 13, 2010 17:46:08 GMT -6
Nope. That one's just "Heroes and Villains," plain and simple. I was kind of making things up as I went for that season - heck, the identities of Phantom and Reaper were drawn out of a hat (yes, Zane was drawn out of a hat; it was truly meant to be). When it started catching on, I got all the ideas for the rest of the seasons, and by now, I know exactly what's going to happen in the last episode of the last season. So, yes, I have a plan.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jul 13, 2010 20:05:14 GMT -6
Nope. That one's just "Heroes and Villains," plain and simple. I was kind of making things up as I went for that season - heck, the identities of Phantom and Reaper were drawn out of a hat (yes, Zane was drawn out of a hat; it was truly meant to be). When it started catching on, I got all the ideas for the rest of the seasons, and by now, I know exactly what's going to happen in the last episode of the last season. So, yes, I have a plan. I remember you saying that before. That's the way to do it I think, otherwise you're writing towards something you know nothing idea about, and that can be like driving blind.
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Post by spideyfan914 on Jul 13, 2010 20:13:24 GMT -6
Yeah, that was largely the problem with Season 1, I think. I like my new stuff a lot better. Not to say I never change things around or improvise or whatever. Heck, I've made DRASTIC changes to my Season 4 ideas, simply 'cause after finishing Season 3, it just didn't seem right. And the layout I've got is BETTER! But yes, having a general idea of what's going to happen is definitely quite good. I know all the major characters for Season 5, and their arcs, and everything - just have a few details to work out when I get there.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jul 13, 2010 20:50:56 GMT -6
Yeah, that was largely the problem with Season 1, I think. I like my new stuff a lot better. Not to say I never change things around or improvise or whatever. Heck, I've made DRASTIC changes to my Season 4 ideas, simply 'cause after finishing Season 3, it just didn't seem right. And the layout I've got is BETTER! But yes, having a general idea of what's going to happen is definitely quite good. I know all the major characters for Season 5, and their arcs, and everything - just have a few details to work out when I get there. Interesting, I preferred season one to two, just my opinion.
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Post by jukenami on Jul 14, 2010 3:40:45 GMT -6
You know what I've noticed about H&V...
It seems like a manga, or anime. The story over all just seems like one, its smart, and interesting.
But yeah, thats just my two cents, meh.
I love the series btw, its my favorite brpg actually.
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Post by Nickpick on Jul 15, 2010 10:51:17 GMT -6
*Tear* Lol! it's a really good series, it's a series you'll be remembered by which is always awesome
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Post by jukenami on Jul 15, 2010 21:27:26 GMT -6
I reeeeaaallly wanna draw out H&V like a comic book.
Like reeeaaallyly realalllulylyylyl
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Post by cradleman on Jul 15, 2010 21:53:13 GMT -6
just finished rereading season 1 and i'll try to get to season 2 tonight, definitely read it by tomorrow. I absolutely love the story, and forgot how truly brilliant it is. i cannot wait to read the new stuff in season 3.
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