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Post by sportsfan23 on Jan 16, 2010 17:23:05 GMT -6
I have created this comment thread to keep the comments off of the story forum, here you can let me know what you think of the latest chapters, or just discuss it, but once again, I ask you please not to comment on the other one, I will post the stories on the story thread, and update you here on when a new one will be posted.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jan 16, 2010 21:52:54 GMT -6
Hey,I remember you said that Side-Effect would go for five chapters and,if I remember right,we're in three right now ans it still seems like it only just started.
So I was wondering if you had an plans to take it any furthre or is chapter five going to be the end?
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Post by sportsfan23 on Jan 16, 2010 22:10:27 GMT -6
I know what you mean, its gone by so fast, i have written a total of 15 chapters right now I think...as for the end, right now, it will end on Episode 5, Chapter 3..
I have had thoughts for a movie, but it'll be very slim chances that I do one
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Post by cradleman on Jan 16, 2010 22:27:25 GMT -6
I just want to say I support you writing a movie eventually. I also support a sequel to the Chosen that hopefully goes better than the sequel to Unassigned.
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Post by sportsfan23 on Jan 16, 2010 22:34:27 GMT -6
haha, yeah, that's what I'm afraid of...I wanted to write the sequel to Unassigned so bad, but I just lost interest and the story fell apart halfway through, it wasn't very well planned either...I spent months on Side-Effect before I wrote it...so I'm not sure if I could come up with enough of a story to do a sequel, at least that is good enough
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Post by cradleman on Jan 16, 2010 22:39:03 GMT -6
I told this to Nick and I'll tell it to you, the best thing you can do for your writing is to have everything planned out before you start writing, it helps avoid a lot of plotholes. or if you write something without planning it out, finish the whole thing(like i did with Arc 1 of WDC) and go back and fix the plotholes. it will help a lot.
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jan 17, 2010 0:09:40 GMT -6
I know what you mean, its gone by so fast, i have written a total of 15 chapters right now I think...as for the end, right now, it will end on Episode 5, Chapter 3.. I have had thoughts for a movie, but it'll be very slim chances that I do one Thanks,I am really looking forward to what you have in store. I really don't know where your going to take it...there are so many ways it could go!...and I have no clue who you'd end it either!!! and that makes me really exsited!!! |
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Post by Frostbite200 on Jan 17, 2010 0:16:30 GMT -6
I told this to Nick and I'll tell it to you, the best thing you can do for your writing is to have everything planned out before you start writing, it helps avoid a lot of plotholes. or if you write something without planning it out, finish the whole thing(like i did with Arc 1 of WDC) and go back and fix the plotholes. it will help a lot. Don't push something you only half believe in. I made a thing with my friends and then we did another one...and we all sort of wanted do make a third one but in the end we all realized that the way we ended the second one was the way we wanted it to end and making another one would just make no sense,plus the story wasn't that good and....I'm just going on. I guess what I'm trying to say is that the end is one of the most inportent things and it's the thing that most people remember...so make it work!!!!! PS:I also would like to see a second Chosen! |
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Post by sportsfan23 on Jan 17, 2010 0:58:41 GMT -6
that's the thing, Im trying to find an ending that would be different from the first too, or at least a story somewhat different...and Chosen's three main characters are killed off, so I'd have to find some way to get new characters or resurrection
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Post by cradleman on Jan 17, 2010 1:01:00 GMT -6
resurrection is easy, it's finding a good way to kill characters off that's hard.
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Post by sportsfan23 on Jan 17, 2010 10:01:31 GMT -6
reserrection is hard if your not trying to find a cheesy way to bring em back...killing off is easy for me lol
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Post by sportsfan23 on Jan 17, 2010 21:47:11 GMT -6
Side-Effect it updated, I am currently working on chapter 4, should be up soon!
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Post by cradleman on Jan 17, 2010 21:48:25 GMT -6
hey, you did know that nothing is censored here(language-wise) right? so especially if we already know the words you are censoring I'm not stopping you from putting them in. just FYI
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Post by sportsfan23 on Jan 17, 2010 21:53:33 GMT -6
good to know, the only reason the ones i just put up are censored is because it was already censored on word.
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Post by sportsfan23 on Mar 1, 2010 21:40:22 GMT -6
the moment you've all been waiting for is here....the long awaited return of side-effect! check out part 1 in the thread!
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Post by sportsfan23 on Mar 1, 2010 21:40:46 GMT -6
(part one of the next episode)
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Post by Frostbite200 on Mar 2, 2010 0:48:35 GMT -6
the moment you've all been waiting for is here....the long awaited return of side-effect! check out part 1 in the thread! Sweet (I say the too much) I just finish it! Keep it up! |
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Post by spideyfan914 on Apr 7, 2010 19:11:10 GMT -6
Hey! I finally read it! And....
THIS THING IS FLIPPIN' AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When's the next one coming out??
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Post by sportsfan23 on Apr 7, 2010 20:16:05 GMT -6
lol...its on hiatus now, but since this is, at least in my opinion, and from what comments I've read, is my best writing, I do want to get back into it after Chosen...It's taking a mid season break right now...it is pretty freakin long, having a total of 25 episodes
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Post by spideyfan914 on Apr 7, 2010 20:34:55 GMT -6
.... I thought it only had 5 episodes....
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