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Post by Nickpick on Jul 3, 2010 13:52:11 GMT -6
This is where i'll post short stories, ideas and stuff like that. Something you can quickly read and feel happy, sad or mad or anything you wish. Somewhere you can escape reality and enter my world for a breif moment. Welcome and watch your step! |
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Post by Nickpick on Jul 3, 2010 13:52:45 GMT -6
The way i came up with this story is in the story, i was coming home one day from the store with my brother and brother's girlfriend when i thought, i could get home quicker if i could teleport and i've always thought teleporting is a cool power and when i got home i actually needed to use the bathroom really badly but my sister already had plans of dying her hair, everything i wrote in the story is what she said and as soon as i closed the door, i threw my arms against my chest and pretended to teleport and this story was born. Weird i know but i'm Nickpick, get use to it! I've always wanted to write a story with kids and abilities. It'll be Trinity but on Earth. I thought if i'm not writing something i'll work on this. So if anyone is interested, let me know. You can type up a character or whatever.
Guernica - The End
The car ride home was nothing more than bumpy roads and pot holes that threw my focus off constantly. How was someone like me suppose to focus when Tucson, Arizona gives me nothing but extreme heat and bumpy streets? I open my eyes and let them adjust to the light outside and let my head lean against the window and stared at what passed by. I would now and then feel a small wave of cold air, the AC barely did the job, i always prefer the windows down and wind on my face then AC but i was yet to get my driver's license so i had to be the backseat driver until then.
"Wanna go to the movies tomorrow? I was thinking about watching The Last Airbender, We can watch Eclipse later"
My brother asked me but i didn't give an answer, his girlfriend who sat in the front seat started asking questions about the movies but i found something else more interesting, something i wish i had headphones on and could be listening to myself. The news! all i heard was bits and pieces, my brother had turned the volume down to 5 so it was like a whisper. I would ask to turn it up but then that would bring the question 'Why do you wanna listen to the news?' i could just see that happening so i closed my eyes and tried listening to what i could hear.
"A 3 story building in Washington....known for...caught fire...firefighters are having trouble..."
That all i needed to hear, i looked out the window, we were nowhere close to being home. DAMN IT! I couldn't port out now...not with my brother and his girlfriend around.
"Hey, think you can speed it up? i gotta go to the bathroom!"
"I'll try"
It didn't help, we reached our home in 30 minutes, i ran out of the car and into my home. I ran to the bathroom when i flicked the light on and saw hair dye products laid out, ready to be used. My sister! Damn it!
"Crystal!"
I looked over at her room, she wore her stained shirt and shorts, damn she was dying her hair.
"I need to use the bathroom badly!"
"Number 2?"
She asked, i nod acting as if i needed to go. She sighs and puts her hair in a pony tail.
"Hand me the box...."
I give her the box, she points at the bottle with white liquid in it.
"And that....and that...and that"
I handed her the bottle, the brush, the instructions and everything that you needed to order to successfully dye your hair. She gave me the peace sign.
"I'm out!"
I slam the door shut, lock it. I threw my arms against my chest in an X form and poof...i teleport or port as i prefer to call it out of my bathroom and into the wet, dark streets of Washington as i stare up at the large building that blazes on fire. The firefighters struggle to control it, cops hold people back...
"Just in time" |
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Post by Nickpick on Jul 7, 2010 16:34:10 GMT -6
I know it's not the first thing i ever written that is non-fiction or whatever. I wanted to write something more about something that could happen, that could be happening. I wanted to try something that didn't involve sword fights or super human powers. I wanted to try reality. So i thought up a story where a group of friends (Us) lived normal lives without living so far apart from each other but living a more mature life.
"Wake up...Wake up"
Nick Pickster opened his eyes, he looked over to the young girl's voice, who laid naked underneath his blackets, she smiles as he stretches and smiles
"Your still here?"
"Yeah silly, i thought we could walk to school together!"
Nick comes to the realization that today's the first day of school, he quickly sits up and grabs his phone and flips it open and reads the time 7:45. He throws the blankets off and throws his boxers on. The girl stared at him like he was crazy, holding the blankets against her chest.
"Nicky Poo...What's the problem?"
Nick looks over at her, grabbing his jeans
"Your still in my bed, that's the problem!"
Her eyebrows come down and she gets angry, looking away from him.
"Take me home right now!"
"Here's a thought...no"
He grabs a random shirt, slips his feet into his shoes, bending the back of the shoes down under his feet. He grabs his backpack and rushes out.
"Wait!"
He sticks his head into his room
"Can i see you tonight?"
She says with a lustful smile, he rolls his eyes and rushes out of his home, pulling his shirt on.
School'd!
Jonathan Cradleman sat at the park bench, head hung down as he was in a deep sleep, Nick saw him and smiled!
"Cradle!"
Jonathan quickly jumped to life
"SPECTACULAR SPIDER-MAN!!"
He snaps out of it and looks up at Nick, He stands up and yawns
"You do realize school starts in 10 minutes"
Nick says with a smile that looked evil and beautiful at the same time. His eyes were bright blue and hair was black, short and spiked up in the front. Jonathan was the same height as Nick, short blond hair with green eyes and glasses.
"I know, i was just waitin for you!"
"I'd consider that sweet if i wasn't creeped out"
Nick walked off, Jonathan grabbed his backpack and caught up with Nick
"Did Juke tell you about his party tonight?"
Jonathan says, putting his backpack on. Nick looks over at Jonatahn
"Yea, He texted me a moment ago, He invited you?"
"well he kinda had to, he said he got a new phone and forgot all our numbers so he called me to get to you"
Nick chuckled as they approached Public Boards High.
"Cradle, what's it like being you?"
He thought about he and took a deep breathe and exhaled.
"Exhausting"
Nick saw the girl who was in his bed walk by and wink at him, he smiles as several girl smile at him as he walks past them, Jonathan even notices. Even a guy winks at Nick which makes Jonathan raise an eyebrow in question. Nick stops and turns toward Jonathan.
"You know what i'm going to do for you tonight?"
Jonathan stared at him, scared to answer him.
"What?"
"I'm gonna get you laid...so what will it be?"
Nick points to several girls.
"XX...or XY"
He points to several flamboyant guys, Jonathan punches Nick's arm.
"I'm not gay!"
"Could of fooled me...XX it is!"
Nick takes a step closer to Jonathan, they're only inches away from each other, making Jonathan uncomfortable.
"Remember this moment, today you change from awkward boy to full grown man...thank me later!""
Nick walks off, Jonathan stands there and looks over at the girls before snapping out of it and rushing towards the school. Juke leans against the lockers staring at some jocks when Nick and Jonathan walk up, They just stand there while Juke's attention is on the guys.
"Good morning"
"Kiss my ass..oh..Hey Nick!"
Blake Jukenami looked over at Nick then at Jonathan and his smile fades
"Jonathan..."
"I'm gonna go to class"
Jonathan just walks off, Blake looks over at Nick.
"So where's the others?"
Blake smiles, drifting to the memory of last night, Nick snaps his fingers, sighing as he does.
"Last night was Shaun's the foreign kid's party...so half of them are either hungover or exploring the wonders of the female body"
"Zane?"
"Oh yeah, he was pretty much out of it when i awoke...didn't you go?"
"No, I was busy doing someone else"
The bell rings, grabbing Juke and Nick's attention, they both look at each other.
"Cya at the party?"
"Yeah, I might be alittle late"
Nick walks one way, Juke another
"Why?"
"It's a surprise...Cya there!"
Nick runs off to class, where he finds his seat next to David Spideyfan. David has brown eyes and curly brown hair, Nick looks over at David's spider-man shirt and smiles. David notices and slightly leans towards him.
"What?"
"Have you ever been laid with that shirt?"
He looks down at it then back at Nick and flips him off
"Have you been laid with that shirt?"
Nick looks down at his shirt, it's striped black and white. He looks back up at David and lets his eyes wonder.
"Are you asking if i had sex with this shirt because if you are then you have a dirty mind my friend!"
"NICHOLAS PICKSTER!"
Nick looks over at the elder teacher who slouches causing the hump on her back to become more noticeable, she pushes her glasses up with her finger on the bridge of her nose.
"Did you say Sex in my class?"
"No, i said 'My ex'...as in 'I wish death upon my ex'"
"Oh..okay...pay attention students"
Nick smiles a successful smile at David, David just scuffs
"With your luck, you think you'd be using it on tests and getting out of this dump"
David started writing in his notebook, Nick scratches his head and shrugs
"Eh if i wanted to leave this place then i would but then how would i get my bed arockin?"
"Believe it or not Nick, there's more to life then sex and drugs"
"There is?"
"Yeah, maybe one day you'll see it"
Nick reaches into his pocket and pulls out 100 hundred dollars and slides it over to David, David looks down at the money than at Nick.
"What that's for?"
"I need you to pick something up for me, do it for me and i'll do whatever you wish"
"No, there's a catch"
Nick smiles and leans forward
"I know your feelings for Paycheck...get me what i want and i'll give you her"
Nick sits up, David takes the money
"God, i feel like if i fail you'll cut my head off"
David nervously chuckles, Nick stares at David then smiles. Moments pass, Nick and Jonathan are walking down the busy hall where they see the group outside.
"Cradle...can i ask you to do something?"
"Yes and call me Jonathan, i'm tired of you referring me to my last name"
"Shut up, your quite annoying"
Nick walks off, Jonathan stands there finally figuring out what he wanted. Zane sits on the bench, water bottle against his forehead and face is pale. He has long black hair and dark brown eyes. His clothing is...dark. David sits next to his feet, eating his lunch with Sarah Paycheck who enjoying the nice warm sun. She's beautiful, brown curly hair with bright green eyes and nice tan skin. Across from her is Juke, who's texting from his phone.
"Where's Frosty?"
Jonathan asked as him and Nick walked up
"He said something about...seeing the nurse for his head...i don't remember"
Sarah says, eyes closed and still enjoying the sun. Nick smiles as he takes a seat next to Sarah. Jonathan walks up to Zane.
"How you feeling?"
"SHUT THE HELL UP! YOUR VOICE IS LOUD AND ANNOYING!"
Zane snaps at him, Jonathan is shocked, he looks over at Nick.
"I told you to shut up, you don't listen to me"
Zane looks over at Jonathan
"Sorry...i just...i'm done with pills, they're messing me up"
Zane reaches into his pocket and pulls out two blue pills, opens the water bottle and pops them in his mouth and swallows.
"Zane...sober up for my party, i need you to be your best"
Everyone is quiet for a moment before breaking out in laughs, Nick looks over at David.
"Your still here?"
"Yeah, I'm at school"
"I told you to go get me something an hour ago...and yet your here"
"But..."
"Go...or i tell"
"Tell what?"
Sarah asks, Nick smiles. David stands up and walks off with his lunch.
I really want to make this my next series but i wanna test it with you guys first. let me know what you think...lol
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Post by spideyfan914 on Jul 8, 2010 23:21:37 GMT -6
Interesting.... So, what IS your next series? This, Midnight Moon, Emily Collins, or what?
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Post by Nickpick on Jul 9, 2010 9:45:21 GMT -6
This topic is just for me to write something when i'm bored or if i get an idea. Maybe one day of these stories will be a major story until then it's just in here. Emily is something i'm working on but Midnight Moon is for sure coming back!
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