Post by Bruce Wayne on Oct 2, 2010 23:56:00 GMT -6
The story is about the 7 deadly sins are being killed off, but 3 survive. ((And I have added one of my own)) They were cursed to hold the powers of the sin and were granted the power of a certain element, depending on their Sin. To start off:
"Something is going on, I feel different. They keep reporting deathes, when I watch my body feels different."
A beautiful young girl sits in a school room writing in an olive notebook
"Ms. Luct, put your journal away and begin taking notes. Just because the city has seen a few deathes doesn't mean the world stops"
She rolls her eyes and brushes her long blonde hair from her face. Rose places the notebook under her desk and begins taking notes, but continues thinking.
"For some reason the guys can't stop drooling lately, like I'm luring them or something. And when I think about it, I can blow wind gusts? Sophtmore year keeps getting worse."
Flashes to an older boy, maybe 20 is in a bar with an empty mug. A bartender walks up to the gentlemen
"Hey kid! I don't remember getting you that!"
"And I don't remember asking your permission. Just buzz of and leave me alone" He said in an annoyed voice.
"Get out, or I can make you!" the bartender shouted back.
"Funny, Just try it" he replies.
The bartender pulls a baseball bat from underneath the bar. He begins to strike the young man but he catches it
"I just said you could try, not succedd."
He tossed the bat, that the man was still holding, to the other side of the room. Other men stand up from the bar and tables surrounding the boy.
"You guys can write 'Griffen was here' on your grave"
The largest takes out a knife and tries to stab Griffenm but is tripped. Anothered musclular man comes at the boy and is lifted, then tossed at the rest of the group; this knocks them down.
"I'll tkae another beer now."
He fills his mugg and walks out the door. When he exits, his eyes turn from a chestnut brown to a blazing red in an instant.The bar behind him goes up in a wall of fire.
"See you in Hell" he says in a cold-hearted tone.
Flashes to a male teenager sitting in a Infirmary in a different school than Rose, the young girl.
"I wanna help. I keep making others sick and I wanna help!" He yells to the nurse.
"I don't know what to tell you." she replies in a questionable voice.
He becomes worried and reaches for the nurse and grabs her arm. She falls to the floor, gasping for breath. The teenager jumps from the table he was sitting on and tries the help the teacher from dying. He grabs her arm even tighter, becoming more worried by the second. Her skin begins turning blue and she stops breathing. He begins to cry and he leaves the room. As he runs down the hall, teachers leave their rooms and begin to panic about what was dripping from his hands, blood.
"Chris! Are you alright!? Chris!" a teacher yells.
He keeps running, but bumps into a student who can't see over a stack of papers. They both fall to the ground and the student begins to scream
"I cant see anything. All I can see is black. Help! Someone Help!
Chris realises what he has done and leaves the school. He begins to wonder if he is a menace. He keeps running to his house. He enters the house, which is unlocked, runs to his room and begins packing a backpack.
"Just go to the one person you know who can help, Rose. Just gotta find her!" He keeps saying over and over to himself.
He leaves the house in a rush and starts to run down the street, to nowhere.
I hope you like this, I just through it together, Id like to hear your comments and ideas, Ill post the next part tomorrow. ;D Again, I hope you liked it!!! ;D
"Something is going on, I feel different. They keep reporting deathes, when I watch my body feels different."
A beautiful young girl sits in a school room writing in an olive notebook
"Ms. Luct, put your journal away and begin taking notes. Just because the city has seen a few deathes doesn't mean the world stops"
She rolls her eyes and brushes her long blonde hair from her face. Rose places the notebook under her desk and begins taking notes, but continues thinking.
"For some reason the guys can't stop drooling lately, like I'm luring them or something. And when I think about it, I can blow wind gusts? Sophtmore year keeps getting worse."
Flashes to an older boy, maybe 20 is in a bar with an empty mug. A bartender walks up to the gentlemen
"Hey kid! I don't remember getting you that!"
"And I don't remember asking your permission. Just buzz of and leave me alone" He said in an annoyed voice.
"Get out, or I can make you!" the bartender shouted back.
"Funny, Just try it" he replies.
The bartender pulls a baseball bat from underneath the bar. He begins to strike the young man but he catches it
"I just said you could try, not succedd."
He tossed the bat, that the man was still holding, to the other side of the room. Other men stand up from the bar and tables surrounding the boy.
"You guys can write 'Griffen was here' on your grave"
The largest takes out a knife and tries to stab Griffenm but is tripped. Anothered musclular man comes at the boy and is lifted, then tossed at the rest of the group; this knocks them down.
"I'll tkae another beer now."
He fills his mugg and walks out the door. When he exits, his eyes turn from a chestnut brown to a blazing red in an instant.The bar behind him goes up in a wall of fire.
"See you in Hell" he says in a cold-hearted tone.
Flashes to a male teenager sitting in a Infirmary in a different school than Rose, the young girl.
"I wanna help. I keep making others sick and I wanna help!" He yells to the nurse.
"I don't know what to tell you." she replies in a questionable voice.
He becomes worried and reaches for the nurse and grabs her arm. She falls to the floor, gasping for breath. The teenager jumps from the table he was sitting on and tries the help the teacher from dying. He grabs her arm even tighter, becoming more worried by the second. Her skin begins turning blue and she stops breathing. He begins to cry and he leaves the room. As he runs down the hall, teachers leave their rooms and begin to panic about what was dripping from his hands, blood.
"Chris! Are you alright!? Chris!" a teacher yells.
He keeps running, but bumps into a student who can't see over a stack of papers. They both fall to the ground and the student begins to scream
"I cant see anything. All I can see is black. Help! Someone Help!
Chris realises what he has done and leaves the school. He begins to wonder if he is a menace. He keeps running to his house. He enters the house, which is unlocked, runs to his room and begins packing a backpack.
"Just go to the one person you know who can help, Rose. Just gotta find her!" He keeps saying over and over to himself.
He leaves the house in a rush and starts to run down the street, to nowhere.
I hope you like this, I just through it together, Id like to hear your comments and ideas, Ill post the next part tomorrow. ;D Again, I hope you liked it!!! ;D