Post by Bruce Wayne on Jan 23, 2011 0:40:14 GMT -6
I am just making this up as I go, no real story behind it yet, just need some comments about the story. Please and thanks!
"One week. I didn't even expect Earth to last that long, but it was one week. One week and Earth was a slave planet. One week and everyone I knew was either dead or working. One week and they took over. They threw out the goverment and order. They replaced all of it with discord and chaos. But they must've experimented on our parents, because I am not like the other workers. I am stronger, faster, smarter. My only friends are like me. Is it a coincidence we all ended up together? We each are different from each other, but even more different from them." I talked to myself while mining.
"Boy, work!" A large, fierce looking warrior said walking up to me. He pushed me to the ground and I tried to stand, ready to throw a fist, but I knew better.
One week was all it took. One week.
"One week. I didn't even expect Earth to last that long, but it was one week. One week and Earth was a slave planet. One week and everyone I knew was either dead or working. One week and they took over. They threw out the goverment and order. They replaced all of it with discord and chaos. But they must've experimented on our parents, because I am not like the other workers. I am stronger, faster, smarter. My only friends are like me. Is it a coincidence we all ended up together? We each are different from each other, but even more different from them." I talked to myself while mining.
"Boy, work!" A large, fierce looking warrior said walking up to me. He pushed me to the ground and I tried to stand, ready to throw a fist, but I knew better.
One week was all it took. One week.
And and how is it cliche?