Sins of the Fathers, Deeds of the Son

[zane]

Descending into Hell, there are some regrets.

First Chapter will be up later today. After i have some breakfast

[zane]

Character Introduction: Zane

"Abandon All Hope, Ye Who Go Through Here."

It was written over the cave. I knew what it was for. So did everyone else in the town of Lleh (Le) Only fools and the Damned went down that cave. I was starting to wonder which one I was.

The thoughts came from a 19 year old boy, his red hair only matched by his eyes of the same color. He wore a black shirt with a matching black jacket and jeans.

"I think it's time to pay father a visit."

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Sins

Zane's Theme Song:

[Nickpick]

(I know not alot of people like commenting in the stories but was actually a good opening. I suck at opening a story. I'm interested to see where this is going)

[zane]

Sorry. Laziness. I was telling myself, I have to write this, I have to write this. But my brain was telling me NO. Do something else.

[zane]

Black screen. A boy's voice, late in puberty, is heard

Some people are afraid of the dark.....

Cut to a young boy shivering in his pitch black room

Others are afraid of death....

Cut to a couple, barely in their 20s, walking down a nightlit street. Suddenly a mugger comes out. He holds a gun and, instead of demanding their money, he shoots them both. Their eyes show fear of the extreme level.

With so many fears in this world, you'd think someone'd stop to think about WHY they're actually afraid. But, I digress. My point is, everyone has a fear. And sooner or later you have to face that fear. What's my fear you ask?

The boy appears onscreen. He has red hair matched only by his red eyes. He wears a white shirt covered by a long black cloak and black jeans. His feet are not seen, as he is only seen from the waist up.

I'm afraid...of my father. His name is.........

Lucifer.


Sins
Coming later today.....

[zane]

I've just noticed that the guy with a hillbilly avatar is putting so much detail and grammar in his stories. Weird.