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Post by zane on Feb 18, 2010 6:12:50 GMT -6
(Sorry. I had school and when I got back I wasn't in a writing mood. I'll put something up in a few minutes)
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 18, 2010 10:43:59 GMT -6
(Oh it's cool! take your time dude!)
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Post by zane on Feb 18, 2010 15:31:43 GMT -6
Zane stands
Alright. Follow me.
Zane sticks his hand out. Suddenly, an odd, human-sized, dome shaped portal opens. It leads to Nick and Drake's location
Time to go
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 18, 2010 17:37:18 GMT -6
(Damn, I wrote an awesome part and i even saw it get posted and it's not here anymore, what the hell! oh and i said not to have Nick and Drake messed with until they came back to the present)
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Post by zane on Feb 18, 2010 17:45:44 GMT -6
(Alright. I never said they found them.)
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 18, 2010 18:42:52 GMT -6
(Well i didn't want them in the future because i wanted the future is be a surprise, i was gonna have my character leave asap)
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Post by zane on Feb 18, 2010 18:45:12 GMT -6
Ok...
I never said it led to the future either. I said "LOCATION." Besides. Portals CAN go wrong.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 18, 2010 18:58:36 GMT -6
Okay ;D
Nick and Drake walk down the abandoned streets, blood soaked the street, covered windows and buildings. The fire burnt the smell of rotting corpses. Nick stops and looks down at a torn teddy bear. Drake looks down at Nick
"So this is it? The end of the world?"
"Looks like it"
"Did you plan this?"
Drake asks Nick, Nick stands up
"The end of the world? No, What a stupid question"
Drake sighs
"No, Did you know it would lead us here?"
"Kinda, I knew it was possible when i saw us doing it in your future"
A trash can falls gaining Drake and Nick's attention, at the end of the street, a group of tribal looking survivors. Their skin was dirty from blood and dirty but what made them stand out were the tattoos that covered a selected few. Each one carried a weapon, created by hand
"Um...look survivors"
Nick makes a fist
"I don't think their survivors"
"Your crazy of course they are, what else are they?"
The group started licking their lips, The leader stood before them covered in white tattoos, his chest popped out, muscles everywhere that made him more threating. He held a staff that past his height. He's eyes narrowed along with his expression, He taps his staff against the floor and the group breaks out running toward Nick and Drake
"Cannibals!"
Nick yelled, Nick started running toward a large building next to them, It was atleast 30 stories high
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Post by zane on Feb 19, 2010 6:26:17 GMT -6
The portal fades. Zane, Kara, and Ben appear on the other side
Sssssssshit.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 19, 2010 21:47:16 GMT -6
Nick and Drake are running through the long hall, all the windows that past are intact. Which was weird. The yells and scream from the tribal survivors was like pins against your spine.
"Nick! Where are we going?"
Drake yelled, Suddenly someone grabs Nick and pulls him, another grabs Drake and pull them into the stair's room. They close the door and the tribal people come screaming by until they're gone. Nick and Drake are against the wall, The people who pulled them in are a norma looking girl. Eyes are blue, hair is black. She wore a tight white tank top and shorts with two guns in their holsters
"Please don't eat us"
Drake said in fear, closing his eyes and putting his hands in front of his face, a failed protection. The woman looks over at the much stronger man that revealed his whole chest, a body builder of sorts with two large staffs on his back, he wore jeans.
"Don't worry about the Bishops, They'll kill you, rape you then eat your skin"
Drake somehow feels better, standing straight and putting his arms down. Both survivors stare at Nick. Nick is sorta creeped out
"Okay, Awkward, someone wanna tell me why i'm the pinata right now?"
"I'm sorry, I'm seen shapeshifter who can't give your look right but this is...amazing"
"what shapeshifters?"
Drake points out but they ignore him
"How long has it been since i've been dead?"
"15 hours"
Nick nods, The woman hands Nick a necklace. It's a blue stone on a black string
"That's Kara's lucky necklace, Why do you have it?"
"It was gripped in your hands"
Nick takes it and holds it
"I like to know what happened, start from the beginning"
"I will explain everything on the way"
"Why to where?"
"Bishops don't give up, which makes them so damn hard to kill. It's not safe here"
-Meanwhile, In The Present-
Ben looks over at Kira, They were in the middle of a city, Everything looks normal. Ben sees a newpaper in the trash, he runs over and takes it out. The date reads Feburary 12, 2011. Ben looks over at Kara and Zane
"I think we're in an alternate reality..."
Kara just nods
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Post by zane on Feb 19, 2010 23:04:57 GMT -6
Odd. My portals have never messed up before. Let's look around. Maybe we'll find Nick and Drake
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 20, 2010 0:07:15 GMT -6
Ben nods as they walk on to the sidewalk, life seems normal until Kara looks up, she sees someone flying in the sky. She taps Ben's shoulder then points, everyone looks in the sky and there are people flying. Other's let their ability control them. Some are shapeshifting creatures, others are really really tall and some aren't
"Guys, i think this is life when abilities are known to the world"
Ben looks around and sees a flyer, He notices something different about it. He walks up to it and it reads
'Leader Of New Earth, Nano'
It showed a picture of Nick, Ben shows Zane and Kara
"Yeah, This is alternate"
--Meanwhile--
The team was in a jeep, driving down a dirt covered freeway, passing dead bodies and empty cars
"5 days in your time, you'll have to face many decisions, lots of them that'll include death and impossible task"
"My friends where are they?"
"Friends?"
The woman questions
"You mean your warriors? Kara, Benjamin..."
"And Zane..."
Nick adds in
"Sorry, I never heard of him. Your friends went M.I.A soon after your death. We looked to them for guidance but we were abandoned and left to carry out your will"
"Will?"
Nick asks
"Yes, Destroy the one they call Nano"
Nano, Nick real name. He wasn't use to hearing it from someone else
"Nano...Who's that?"
Nick says, trying to ignore the fact that it's him
"A copy, clone some might call it but I've call him devil, demon and nasty sin"
"Devil?"
"He's the one who brought on this nasty destruction, He wanted kids to reveal their abilities amongst the world, doing that they'll destroy the innocent humans without abilities and take control. Creating a new world...called New Earth"
"Dude sounds messed up"
"Yes, He truly was...Nick, It was you who planned on stopping him but...when i found you...you were still alive and you told me something"
"What?"
Drake asks, Nick looks at him with evil eyes, Drake ignored him
"You told me to fear the masked man, for he brings evil. You told me of your plans on killing him and seconds before you passed...you gave me his name"
"Zane?"
Nick already accepted the fact it was Zane but the woman was silent, the name meant nothing to her
"Who is this zane you talk about?...No...His name was Drake"
There was a silence in the room, Nick looked at Drake, Drake was angry and in shock. He looks at Nick
"You...your gonna kill me?"
"I...I didn't know..."
"AGH!"
Drake grabs Nick by the neck but before anyone could react, they were gone. reappearing in the raining field where they last were, Drake is choking Nick on the floor as he sat on him
"YOUR GONNA KILL ME!"
"I...Dra...I"
Nick started to close his eyes, slowly dying
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Post by zane on Feb 20, 2010 0:14:18 GMT -6
Something's wrong. Something's happening. And it's not good.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 20, 2010 0:33:15 GMT -6
Nick grabs Drake's arms, seeing into his future
-Flashfoward #1- Drake wears a long black cloak, the hood hangs over his head, not really his face. His mask is pure chorme. His eyes are pitch black, Nano sits on a high chair, like a king
"I want them hunted down and killed"
"Yes Master"
He bows and walks off
-Flashforward #2- "Yep, This is Alternate"
Drake watches Kara, Ben and Zane from afar then walks off
"I found them"
-Final FlashForward- It's raining, Drake is in his normal clothing, he holds a gun at Nick
"You don't have to do this...Drake, Your my friend...I know there's good in you and i would never kill you"
Nick releases Drake, after sending all the pain into Drake's body then pushes him off, Drake's backpack flies open, clothes fly everywhere and a gun falls on the floor. Nick gets up, Drake picks the gun up and aims it at Nick
"You don't have to do this...Drake, Your my friend and I know there's good in you...i would never kill you"
"That woman knew what she was talking about, she wasn't lying"
"The future isn't written in stone, i've seen lots of visions and in them i never met Ben, i never saw myself in the future...My vision can change and i know that now...please, believe me when i say i would never kill you"
Drake's arm is shaking, the gun rattles when the heavy rain drops hit it. Drake drops the gun and falls to his knees, Nick takes a deep breath of relief
"The future...it's not going to happen, we're gonna change it. I promise"
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Post by zane on Feb 20, 2010 1:00:39 GMT -6
"Let's do some searching. Kara, you're with me we'll check the Slums. Ben, you check the city."
Zane and Kara head for the Slums of the city. They stop in the middle of the sidewalk. Zane turns toward Kara
"This is going to hurt for a minute"
Zane knocks Kara unconcious. He then focuses his energies on returning home, then making a bubble around him and Kara. Inside, time stood still. But outside, time went on. In a matter of hours they had gone to the future.
"There's just something I need to see."
Zane leaves Kara in a nearby hotel. He runs. He sees the future as Drake and Nick saw it. He continues to run. Eventually, he comes across a graveyard. He walked inside, searching the graves. Each one was chipping away from age and winds. Then, Zane came on the one he wanted to see. His.
Here lies Zane Reaper. Traitor to Nano.
The letters were almost faded away to nothing. All that stayed of them were small indents in the rock. Zane clenched his hand into a fist. He screamed to the heavens, then returned to looking at the grave. He crushed it, and left. Returning to the hotel.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 20, 2010 1:23:51 GMT -6
Ben walks into the city when he feels a cold wind down his spine
"Move and I'll rip your f**king spine"
The whisper traveled into Ben's ear by an invisible man
"Your being watched by a Knight, I know cause I'm a Knight apart of The Resistance. Find your friends and leave this time now!"
"What time is this?"
"It's 30 days before Nano takes power!"
Ben's eyes get wide, He turns around and starts running, He turns into the slums and finds Kara on the ground, Zane, who is now standing over her, looks up at Ben
"What the hell happened?"
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Post by zane on Feb 20, 2010 1:26:08 GMT -6
Long story short. Time travel.
Zane fills Ben in on what he did in the future
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 20, 2010 1:34:44 GMT -6
Ben picks Kara up
"Take us back to the present now!"
Nick and Drake sat inside the car, both are quiet as 'Love Hurts' plays on the radio
"Wow! this is awkward"
Nick says, Drake starts to chuckle, breaking him out of his emo mood
"Lol! i was just hoping nothing from the 80's started playing. If The Police started playing i was out of this car"
Drake jokes back, both are laughing inside the car
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Post by zane on Feb 20, 2010 8:10:58 GMT -6
Zane opens up another portal. This time, he focuses all his energy into it. The trio walks inside, emerging back where they started, the past.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 20, 2010 12:53:25 GMT -6
A flash of purple, white and blue from behind the car gains Nick and Drake's attention "I guest the warrior's are back"
Drake looks over at Nick
"The part in the future when i turn on everyone, that can change right?"
Nick nods
"Like i said the future isn't written in stone"
"Good then i'd like you to keep that part out"
"Yeah, Sure"
"Thanks"
The rain begins to calm down as a new day begins to arrive. They get out of the car and see Kara, Ben and Zane standing there. Nick smiles
"Nick!"
Kara runs to him and hugs him with a tight hug
"I thought i never see you again"
Zane walks up but Ben doesn't move, he stands there
"Ben.."
Nick says as soon as Kara released him, Nick opens his arms
"You look like you need a hug"
Ben slowly smiles but doesn't move, Nick shrugs and walks up to him and gives him a hug
"Whatever happened...happened in the past, we got the future to focus on"
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