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Post by zane on Feb 20, 2010 14:20:26 GMT -6
I think that was always our biggest focus.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 20, 2010 21:48:45 GMT -6
"I got something to say"
Nick said, everyone looks at him
"Me and Drake have been in the future and he saw and heard many things. What's coming is bigger than all of us and if we're gonna take it straight on then we'll be stupid but brave...We're the warriors who must understand that if we don't do anything....the future will play out as we saw it. Death is bond to happen, we must get hurt but we...we, us....we're friends and we're gonna see this through"
Kara smiles
"I understand if you don't want to do this, we won't treat you different or anything like that. So if your in then put your hand in, if your not then leave it out"
Kara quickly puts her hand out, Ben puts her hand in, Nick smiles
"Zane, Drake..."
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Post by zane on Feb 20, 2010 21:54:47 GMT -6
Well. If Nick and Kara are in, then I'm up for it.
Zane puts his hand in
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 20, 2010 22:08:29 GMT -6
Zane places his hand on Kara's and Ben, Drake steps up and puts his hand on Zane's. Nick smiles
"Let's do this then"
Nick put his hand on everyone else's suddenly a wave of pain hits Nick, he flies back and hits the back window of the car
"NICK!"
Kara scream, Nick falls off the car, his eyes are closed and his breathing is short and low
"We need to get him to a hospital!"
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Post by zane on Feb 20, 2010 22:21:38 GMT -6
HOLD ON!
Zane rushes Nick to the backseat, then goes to the driver's seat, his foot glows black as he floors the gas, the car seems to disappear due to its speed. Zane stops it outside a hospital
GO GO GO!!!
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 21, 2010 13:38:37 GMT -6
Ben took Nick from the backseat and rushed him into the hospital, Nick had blood coming from his head, Ben was covered in it, doctors take Nick on a strecher and roll him away
-3 Hours Later-
Everyone waits in the waiting room. The doctor walks up to them, taking his bloody gloves off and his mouth and nose guard. Ben and Kara stand up, Drake is sitting while Zane watches from the vending machine with his hoodie up so nobody sees his face.
"Benjamin right?"
Ben nods, The doctor looks down then back at Ben and shakes his head
"I'm sorry, He didn't make it"
Kara is overcomed in tears, She grabs onto Ben and starts crying, Ben just stands there, quiet. Drake looks away while Zane looks at the vending machine, pretending to be hungry
"Can i...see him?"
The doctor nods, Ben helps Kara sit next to Drake, she cries on Drake's shoulder. The doctor leads Ben into Nick's room. Nick is on the table, blankets cover his body expect his face. Ben walks up to him while the doctor closes the door
"I..."
Tears fall from Ben's eyes
"You can't be dead...you saw the future and you don't die today...Nick, I'm not a leader...I can't lead these people and prepare for some war. So...stop faking it and wake up...please"
Silence fills the room, Ben walks up to Nick's body and stares down at his face
"You son of a b*tch...wake up!"
Ben's spine starts to turn a bright orange, he places his hand on Nick's body
"wake up!"
Ben wipes the tears,He lets a moment pass then leans in and kisses Nick's forehead
"Goodbye...Nano"
Suddenly Nick comes to life, he starts shaking, Ben steps back, He runs outside
"DOCTOR!...DOCTOR!"
Several doctors run over to Ben, Ben and the Doctors run into the room where Nick is missing. The doctors look around
"Where's the body?"
Ben looks around
"It was just there, he opened his eyes and started shaking..."
Suddenly one doctor flies across the room, the other is grabbed the neck and thrown into the window, Ben looks and standing there is Nick, He's naked. His chest is sowen shut but the cuts begin to heal. Nick smiles
"Hello Benjamin"
Ben steps back
"Your not Nick"
"No, I'm not...My name is N13 but i prefer Nano"
Nick smiles a wicked smile
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Post by zane on Feb 22, 2010 16:49:49 GMT -6
But I prefer Nano....
The words rang through Zane's head. He had heard the name before..
Flashback:
Zane stands with his creator. They speak.
Zane. I must tell you this. You will soon come across a man named Nano. He is the one who will destroy this world.
"But..What should I do about it?"
I trust you know by now about the trouble with your existence
"You mean the fact that I'm not supposed to exist? Yeah. I figured that out, about the time when you said it."
The reason you were made. The reason I made you, was to defeat Nano. That is what you are here for.
"So. How do I do it?"
When the time comes....You'll know.[/color]
End Flashback
Zane runs toward Nano.
Ben! GET BACK!!
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 22, 2010 17:42:20 GMT -6
Nano simply puts his hand up and Zane freeze mid-air, Nano looks at Zane, getting right in his face
"Zanu-Vola-Gavin...White Knight, I thought i killed you in 14th century"
Nano addressed him by his origin name, Nano smiled with his other hand, he raised it, the doctor's clothes to fade off him and reappear on Nano
"There we are"
Zane struggled suddenly Drake appeared in the room, Nano looked at him
"And there's my warrior, Drakus...Kill Benjamin, I'll deal with Zane"
Drake reached into his pocket and pulled a gun at Nano, Nano smiled
"Human weaponary"
Nano with his left hand makes a suddenly fist causing the gun to crush itself in Drake's hand
"I forget what year it is"
Nano looks over at Ben
"January 3, 2011"
Nano smiles
"Right on time. Benjamin...You might prove some worth"
Nano snaps his finger and Benjamin is gone in a flash, Nano smiles as he looks at Zane
"Your still not strong enough to kill me...but this body i've taken has seen his fate whichs means i must find someone stronger to control. Prehaps you'll be the one...You'll become bothersome while i'll plan ahead...I've moved my piece"
Suddenly Drake falls to the floor, a ear pinching noise that causes his nose and ears to bleed.
"Clearly you go by a different name, which is..."
Nano closes his eyes, letting Nick's memories take over
"Zane...Human's are their names...they've lost touch"
Suddenly the noise stops for Drake, Drake is on his knees, not moving, head down, hiding his face
"Get stronger, I'll be waiting for you on the 11th next month...until then...deal with my right hand"
Nano snaps his finger and He's gone in a flash, Drake stands up, The iris in his eyes are pure red.
"My god...It's good to be back"
Drake looked at his hands, it was clear he wasn't himself
"Bodie's abit young but it'll do...Oh right, N wanted you dead..we'll let's get this over with"
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Post by zane on Feb 22, 2010 18:10:06 GMT -6
Have fun. I'm not staying here.
Zane dissapears. He follows Nano's trail. First, he tries to find Ben. After some time, he found Ben.
Ben. Come on. Stick with me.
Zane and Ben head out, following the trail that Nano left behind. It was faint, but there. Soon, they found him.
(thoughts)Zanu-Vola-Gavin. The White Knight. Is that who this body belongs to? (out loud) Ben. I'm going to go in there. I don't know if I'll come out. Please. Do something for me.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 22, 2010 18:49:49 GMT -6
Drake walks out of the room
"Where the hell?"
Kara walks up to Drake, Drake eyes her up and down
"Where's everyone?"
"Well hello little miss lady, looks like we need to catch..."
All of Drake's memories come to Drakus, Drakus opens his eyes, eyes go from red to green
"Kara, Yeah...Everyone disappeared even Nick"
"What!"
"Yeah but i'll tell you what, we'll go find them"
Drakus offers his hand, She takes in and poof their gone
-Meanwhile-
"I'm as strong as you, I can take Nano head on, Whatever happens...we're doing this together so save your speech for later"
Ben stares at Zane with eyes that were demanding
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Post by zane on Feb 22, 2010 19:02:46 GMT -6
No. One of us has to stay. And it's you. Look. I'm sorry I didn't trust you. I should've. But right now. This is something I have to do alone.
Zane turns toward the building. He turns his head toward Ben.
Tell Kara. I'll miss her.
Zane knocks Ben out. Then heads inside. He meets with Nano
NANO! COME OUT HERE!!
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 22, 2010 20:24:41 GMT -6
Nano is in a metallic room, like a mirror room. He held his palms open, still wearing the doctors white coat and clothing underneath
"Give me a moment will you?"
Suddenly his clothing turns black in a flash, Zane covers his face from the wave it sends out. Nano looks down at his clothing
"Much better!, Zanu...Or Zane, Sorry old habits..."
Nano walks up to Zane
"You've followed my trail meaning your strong, meaning your ready to fight"
Suddenly Drakus appears with Kara in the room with Nano, holding her by the neck
"Nano, Lookie who i have here"
"Kara! Good...Kill her!"
Drakus shrugs, he starts to squeeze Kara's neck tighter, Nano watches at it hits the core of Zane, Nano can feel his feelings for her
"Wait!"
Drakus stops
"Zane...you slight devil, I've known you for centuries and you never once showed interest in a woman....Why is Kara so different? because as you well know, This host also shares feelings for her then again he also shares feelings for Benjamin"
Drakus continues to hold his grip on Kara, she tries to control the emotions around her but nothing
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Post by zane on Feb 22, 2010 21:54:44 GMT -6
Let. Her. Go.
Zane's skin turns pitch-black. A black wing begins to grow from his back on the left side. His mask cracks, then breaks.
LET HER GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Angel Zane attacks Drakus, nearly killing Drakus. He takes Kara from Drakus's arms. Zane puts her down next to Ben's unconcious body. Zane returns to the battlefield.
This is what I was made for! Nano, TODAY YOU DIE!!!
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 23, 2010 12:32:57 GMT -6
NO TIME TO EDIT. SORRY!
Benjamin wakes up, gasping for air. He looks next to him to see Kara, knocked out and not hurt
"Don't worry, I'll stop this"
Benjamin gets up, his hands are shaking, his spine begins to glow orange being able to see through his skin. Steam begins to exit from his ears, His skin begins to change into a orange color. His clothes catch on fire, his fist turn into fist of fire.
"Drakus, stop acting..."
Drakus gets up, lips and nose bleeding, a tounge of blood came down from his head. He laughs
"Thought the moment called for it"
"Drakus, deal with Zane...I've grown bored of this"
Nano snaps his fingers and suddenly the room begins to blow with powerful wind
"I'll see you in 10 days...when i will rule this planet"
There's a bright flash and Nano is gone, The wind calms down and Drakus stands there
"Your pretty strong, i'll give you that but are you..."
Suddenly Drakus is hit with a powerful amount of fire, Ben is in ultimate state. His whole body is orange and glowing, eyes are pure white along with his mouth
"AGHHHH!"
Kara walks into the room, dizzy. She walks up to Ben, who's screaming. She touches his chest but it doesn't burn her. She puts her other hand on his arm that fire rages out from. The fire stops and slowly Ben returns to normal. Once his normal skin color is back, She hugs him.
"It's over..."
Drakus' colors are half burnt, He grabs broken piece of metal that came from the wall. Kara releases Ben, Kara releases Ben, She looks over at Zane, who's in his ultimate state. She hugs him, calming him down. She kisses his cheek
"Thank you"
Drakus throws the piece, it flies and pierces Kara in the chest as she releases Zane, Zane stares at her eyes as she lets the pain travel through her body.
"NO!"
Drakus stands up, picking up Zane's cracked mask as he does. He places it on his face
"You've burnt my pretty face...You'll pay for that"
Drakus is gone in a flash. Ben rushes over to Kara, Kara brushes her hand on Zane's face
"Your...beauti...ful"
Kara releases her last breath while she dies in Zane's arms
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Post by zane on Feb 23, 2010 15:17:07 GMT -6
(Plot twist. Nice)
No. No. NO!!!!
Zane's body begins to glow with a purple and black aura. His hands begin to turn into claws, he grows another wing as his eyes become pure red, releasing their true power. To kill whatever looks into them. He was no longer in his Ultimate State. This was the real Zane. This was the being that was not supposed to exist. This was the being that was made to kill.
*growls* Now. Now you die.*growls*
The Being leaps at Drakus, using his claws, fists, and powers to inflict a great amount of damage. Drakus is stunned by the raw power, unable to return a hit. Soon, he is bleeding from every opening in his body, along with the gashes inflicted on him. The Being stops. Zane's conciousness returns.
No. I won't kill you. It's not what she would've wanted.
A black bubble picks up Ben, Zane holds Kara up. They leave Drakus, dying. They walk back to New Jersey, melancholy in the air. Soon, Zane comes upon the home of the creator.
I sense things didn't go according to plan.
We need your help.[/color]
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 23, 2010 17:53:28 GMT -6
Suddenly all the metal in the room begins to form into a liqiuid that starts to rise, Drakus smiles as he slightly struggles from the pain on the ground
"...Help...Required"
The liquid mental shapes into a thin body, a woman's body. Skin is a mocha colored, she wears thin clothing. a thin cloth around her waist, another wrapped around her breast. Her wears a white robe, standing before Drakus, Drakus smiled
"Le'Vein Ya Goni Sem Na"
Suddenly Drakus' wounds begin to heal, Drakus gets up slowly
"What about the face love?"
"You must live with that? You've dishonored us, wear that mask as your living proof"
"Cause you just remove a finger or something?"
She turns into dust, flying away with the wind
"Le'vet?" LE'VET! DAMN IT!"
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Post by zane on Feb 23, 2010 21:07:57 GMT -6
I can only bring her back if she wants to come back. I have to tell you that now.
Alright. Just do what you can.
The Creator focuses on Kara. A flash of white occurs. When it fades, Kara has been revived, and the Creator is gone.
Kara? It worked? IT WORKED!
Zane rushes to Kara and hugs her
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 23, 2010 22:54:08 GMT -6
(Sorry about the previous post, wasn't in the best mood so i wrote something real quick and didn't edit. Lol
Kara didn't speak, Zane released her and she wasn't smiling instead a tear went down her face. She steps back and walks off
"Kara?"
Ben calls out but she just keeps walking
-Meanwhile-
Drakus reappears in a chair, sitting close by Nano, who's wearing different clothing. A black peacoat with a black tuxedo underneath, drinking red wine with his feet up on a large table full of frightend people. Nano was in the middle of a wedding, Drakus removes his mask and grabs a piece of cake with his hands
"Zane got away with Benjamin but i gave them a going away present, I stabbed the girl...She's long gone"
"Good"
"Now what?"
Drakus says with his mouth full of cake
"We let Chess take over then we let the world end in a ball of flames"
"We the world ends...what happens to us?"
"Oh right we're avoiding the end of the world...Thanks Drakus, You just embressed me in front of all these nice people"
"Sorry Boss, What you gonna do to redeem yourself?"
Nano stands up, putting the glass down
"Giving them my gift"
Nano claps third times and each person, the men, women and child all glow bright then on the fourth clap the glowing stops, revealing nothing but skeletons. Nano smiles, grabbing the wine bottle
"How was my performance?"
"Poor performance indeed"
Nano chuckles, drinking from the bottle
"Let's go!"
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Post by zane on Feb 23, 2010 23:09:51 GMT -6
Kara. Is something wrong?
(yeah. Short post. I kinda used up the writing section of my brain for the Dreaming pilot. I should be good to go in a few minutes.)
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 23, 2010 23:24:56 GMT -6
Zane goes to follower her when Ben grabs his arm, stopping him
"How do you think she feels? She was in a better place, no stress, no worrying...no pain. You brought her back to a place full of it. Right now, Your the last person she wants to see...Give her space, let her calm down"
Ben releases Zane
"If Kara means alot to you then...she'll forgive you, i know i would"
Ben pats on Zane's back suddenly all the doors and windows are smashed in, smoke bombs go off. Checkered S.W.A.T like officers run into the place. Guns drawn on Zane and Ben
"DON'T MOVE!"
One screams out, they shoot twice, darts that knock out Ben and Zane like a charm
"Take them to the trucks, Where's the girl?"
"Place is empty Sir!"
"Search the rest of the house, She has to be here!"
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