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Post by zane on Feb 23, 2010 23:28:11 GMT -6
(narrating)"It all went dark quickly after that."
We were forced out. I never even got to say goodbye to Kara.
I didn't know where she went. All I did know, was that my Creator had taken her against her will. I didn't want that for her. If she wanted to stay dead. I should've let that happen. Instead I was blinded. Now. I don't know what to do."
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 23, 2010 23:49:43 GMT -6
Season Finale. The next post are gonna be from the past for awhile then we'll continue this story. So this post i'm about to write will be the last of the future. Your was a really good one. Also song fits the last post real wellwww.youtube.com/watch?v=M7D4SZS5yJMKara is running down a long hall, arms open as Chess Soldier chase her down."Shoot To Kill!" ---------------------------- Nano stands on top of a skyscrapper. Arms out, letting the wind hit him. He laughs as Drakus looks down and spits--------------------------- Benjamin and Zane were in the back of a truck, handcuffed and both unconisious. (Narrate)"It wasn't clear what Nick and Drake saw when they disappeared, maybe they saw the future for what it'll become, Maybe we saw it for what is wasn't going to become. Either way...it was hell. I was i could rewind time, you know? start from the beginning...but who am i kidding? I'm a rook, a waste of space with an ability. What i'd give...to go back to before christmas when things were...normal" -November 6th, 2010- "N, Christmas is coming...You know what you want?" Nick and Kara walk down a snowy sidewalk, wearing coats and are side by side"Thanksgiving is first Kara then it's Christmas but honestly...i want nothing, You?" "I don't know, Haven't thought about it" "Well i can't wait until christmas is over...i'm sure 2011 will be a good year" Nick didn't know of the events to come, he hasn't seen the future, he hasn't seen the end of the world nor has he seen Nano. Things were just beginning. Things were just...ending.
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 0:04:20 GMT -6
(narrating)"You really have to wonder. Was it worth it? Looking back. Was it worth existing? I was never supposed to be here. Never supposed....to be."
November 6th 2010. 1 year before Zane met Nick and Kara.
There is nothing but white. Then, someone begins to walk on the white. It is Zane. However, no part of him can be seen. His mask is on, and his cloak overshadows his arms and legs. He walks, and walks. Never stopping. Never speaking. Then, in the horizon. He sees a pair of men. He runs toward them. The men were playing...Chess. Suddenly, Zane blacks out. He wakes up in the body of Zanu, believing that he had lived a life, trained as a Bishop in the modern era.
(narrating)That's when everything became topsy-turvy. When I came to exist.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 24, 2010 9:35:32 GMT -6
(Narrates) "I never knew what lead my life in to such events that i was given the ability to see the future. It's not some handed down ability my parents had. It's an ability that found me, That had a story to tell and choose me to tell it. I knew i wasn't alone and i didn't care, All i did care about was not changing the future.
Nick stands along with a crowd of people wearing black at a funeral. Two caskets are lowered into the ground, It starts raining. Nick just stands there
"Loosing both parents at the age of 14 makes you look at the world different. I mean i wasn't to close to my parents. They were abusive, hit me alot maybe it was because i had an ability, Maybe i was a disappointment. I didn't care, I knew they didn't love me and i had already accepted that. That's why i didn't shed a tear at their funeral, it's also why i bother getting help from anyone. I was giving the only offer which was to move with my grandma to Tucson, Arizona...I denied and stayed home with my warm little house with my best friend"
Nick is seen tossing and turning in his bed
"When i heard about someone with an ability they always said their abilities manifested during puberty, It applied to me as well. Imagine along with my voice changing along with awkward situations, The ability to see the future came after that. My life was different...The saw the world as a big chess board and each move mattered, i need to play smart and not reckless..."
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 10:58:39 GMT -6
(narrating)The story I have makes no sense. After I came to be, the King; an omnipotent man who could change the very way people thought, asked me to be his right-hand man. As a Bishop, I couldn't refuse. But as Zane, I wasn't sure.
Zane has just come to exist. He is getting up from his knees when someone helps him. The man wears a long cape-like cloak, with a hood that hid his face. Zane went along with the man, unsure of what the future held.
(narrating)The King acted like a father to me. He taught me the very things I needed to learn. He also told me stories. Stories of the Creators. 2 powerful men who could create or destroy anything. They had even made a planet for themselves. On our world, they were gods. But on theirs, they were normal people. I never understood those stories, until I met one of the Creators
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 24, 2010 11:42:06 GMT -6
"Very little is known about my past. My father and Mother never kept baby pictures. Mainly because i think they didn't take any. Did i have a brother? did i have a sister? When did i loose my first tooth? what was my first word?"
Nick sits on the wet grass, staring at two tombstones
"I mean for someone who knew the futures, who knew all the answers, i didn't have the important ones. Like my name? My name is Nano Thirteen and yet my parent's last name was Valentine. Was i created from my mother and father? Or was i some experiment gone wrong? Maybe i'm the child of little green people living on mars."
Joseph Valentine 1952 - 2008 "Husband, Father, Friend...
"A part of the tombstone always got my attention, craved in by a sharp knife was the word 'Creator' this meaning had no meaning to me. Creator of life, Creator of Machines....He was apart of something much greater than my understanding...My mother also had it craved on her tombstone. Huh...I said it again, My...like they meant something to me"
Nick stands up and puts his hands in his pockets and walks off
-January 5th, 2011-
Ben wakes up, it takes awhile for his eyes to adjust to the bright lighting. He looks over and Zane is sitting at the corner of a jail cell. Ben picks himself up
"How long i've been knocked out?"
Zane nods toward the wall, Ben looks over, there are 3 craved slashes in it, Ben looks over at Zane, eyes wide
"it's been 3 days?"
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 12:18:40 GMT -6
No. 3 Seconds. YEAH, three days. Now help me out.
Zane is trying to focus his powers into something that could help them escape, with no luck.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 24, 2010 16:00:43 GMT -6
Ben takes a seat
"Don't waste your time. That metal is a type of metal that keeps us in, in other words, that metal is the switch that turns out abilties off, it's why Chess Officers use it as there bullets. One shot to us and we're knocked out"
"He's right, Didn't realize you still had in it you Benjamin. As a scout member, it's surprising"
Standing on the other side was a heavy set african american with a navy blue business suit, long black hair. Benjamins scuffs
"I'm Erica Dane, It's nice to see you again Benjamin"
Zane looks at Ben then at the Erica
"Nice to see you too...Mother"
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 16:32:21 GMT -6
What do you want?
In only three days Zane had become cold and merciless, with no compassion or happiness left in his voice.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 24, 2010 16:50:53 GMT -6
"Yes, Well we've found your girlfriend...Let's just say she's was a more than welcoming"
"She's helping you?"
Ben says standing up
"Actually she's working on finding Nano, Which is why we need you? With your help we could put Nano in his resting place, We're willing to drop all charges and let you walk free"
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 17:03:39 GMT -6
And what do you want from us? Stopping Nano can't be your only angle
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 24, 2010 18:07:11 GMT -6
Erica smiles
"Oh Chess has many angles but Chess is true to their word. We're forming a squad of Rooks just like yourself. You take Nano out, You'll return back to your normal lives. If you deny which many have...You'll be.."
Two shoots go off in the air
"Okay, We'll do it under one condition"
"That is?"
"I run the squad"
"I might have to pull a few strings but yeah, i think i can do that..."
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 18:15:22 GMT -6
I'm not a rook.
"I'm sorry?"
I'm not a rook. I was trained as a Bishop. But I'm not even supposed to be here! I'm not even supposed to exist!
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 19:33:53 GMT -6
Cool song.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 24, 2010 20:05:01 GMT -6
(I'm an idiot! i meant to post this in the fave tv/movie thread lol, i'll delete it! HAHAHA)
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Post by zane on Feb 24, 2010 20:24:44 GMT -6
Well. I'm waiting for you to post.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 25, 2010 10:12:38 GMT -6
"Well that doesn't matter anymore...Welcome to Chess"
She walks off, A guard walks up and unlocks the cell, he points in the direction and they walk that way. Down the hall, straight up to a room. Benjamin opens in and two spotlights hit the ground, Under each spotlight is a variety of weapons. All Chess Branded with a pawn piece logo.
"Gentlemen, Make yourself well known with our weapon display. We figure it'll take an army to destroy Nano, So why not became your own army"
Erica spoke from the speakers
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Post by zane on Feb 25, 2010 22:14:01 GMT -6
Zane grabs nothing. He heads to a dark corner and sticks out his hand, in his hand two swords form from the shadows. He returns to the spotlight
Let's get this over with.
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Post by Nickpick on Feb 26, 2010 22:48:30 GMT -6
"I want him hunted down and killed"
Nano says, petting an all black pit bull with one white spot on his chest. Drakus grabs his mask and puts it on, throwing the hood up
"Benjamin is a traveling with Zane, Last time that bastard almost killed me"
"Zane will not be a problem once you give him my location"
"What you plan on killing him?"
Nano stands up
"No, I plan on doing something much much worse"
"What's worse then killing him?
Nano sighs, squeezing the bridge of his nose
"Just go please"
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Post by zane on Feb 28, 2010 12:51:50 GMT -6
Zane opens a door and emerges into the outside world with Ben
First things first. We need to find someone
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